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Thread: male figure.
November 6th, 2007 #1
this is just one.
but I was pretty proud after I finished
I think this deserves a different thread than my hands thread
[and so you know I HATE drawing feet. I have no problem with hands though.]
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The legs need to be lengthened by quite a bit (unless this guy is some kind of hobbit-hybrid). Also, draw the hands and feet. You don't get better at it by just leaving them out.
As the ego shrinks, so the spirit expands.
November 6th, 2007 #3
hahaha at least you draw better legs than me XD
The left arm seem a bit too out, move it towards the body until it's close to the breast.
Left leg is okay.
Try move the right leg towards the left, since to me, it looks like he's in a walking position, taking small steps.
good luck, here's a modification of your draft XD
http://jsiu123.deviantart.com - my experiment gallone, enjoy
http://jsiu123.deviantart.com/gallery/#_browse/scraps - deviant sketch untidy
November 6th, 2007 #4
Your lines are too broken up. Try to get continuous strokes - it makes a difference. Also, sketching is best done with a paper and pencil.
November 6th, 2007 #5
thanks so much for the critique .
I will be sure to work on that
-Havoc- thanks I know
but I dont want my tablet to go to waste haha
I'll have some hand drawn stuff up as soon as I mow my lawn
its pretty much the same pose.
but I didnt use a reference
I drew it at school
while listening to my boring Japanese teacher
November 6th, 2007 #6
you can barely see it.
but my scanner is a piece o crap
the head is lopsided and the arms are too big besides that
what else should I work on in this one
November 6th, 2007 #7
Ok first thing you need to do is to build your figure.
Part of the problem it seems is you are drawing it as an outline (or it looks that way from the last attempt)
Human figure are 7 1/2 heads tall or 8 for heroic, yours struggles to reach 5 1/2.
I'd suggest you invest in a good anatomy book/ figure drawing book and then start a sketch book on CA.
Here's a quick paint-over to show you, using your 'drawn' head as the head size.
Last edited by Venger; November 6th, 2007 at 10:22 PM.
November 6th, 2007 #8
thanks for the help
and so you know
I do the outline first
which from what I am hearing is bad?
been doin it all wrong
how do you do the height graph thing?
or did you do that yourself?
Last edited by Green-fire; November 6th, 2007 at 11:54 PM. Reason: forgot to add something
November 7th, 2007 #9
I used your paintover to make my little stick thingie
it actually helped alot thanks
ready for more critiques
November 7th, 2007 #10
forgot to include this.