Heres some stuff
Right now my goal is to finish a piece with a high enough degree
to get published in exotique 5 its a pretty hefty goal but im giving my self a pretty good amount of time to work and study and theirs really nothing to lose by trying so heres the beginning steps. Attachment 639729 Attachment 639732 Attachment 639737 Attachment 639738
Hey great studies, keep up with those paintings from life. and a crit: that gal looks a bit too small in that car, and that gun holding hand looks too close to us, if youd fix the size of the girl it should work out beter I guess. Dont stop man.
Thank u Pijus. ur deffinatly right about the girl next time i need to consider the size relationships of the bg and figures before hand more and maybe not draw them as u separate pieces it will be fixed. right now im gona put it on hold and re-evaluate the piece and mybe try think a little differenty
welll heres some stuff
hey, awesome update, stylish, looks intersting. i think the final one should be the second one, becouse its not just simpy black and white. and those environments, they look great, cartoonish sketch. keep up with those good studies too! cheers man! damn why im the only one whos commenting your sketchbook, hm :/
Here they are I liked playing around with pretty much the same composition with these just changing up the back and midle ground, although im still pretty lost with the coloring I tryed but got fustrated my what i didnt know soo ill have to work on color alot more. Attachment 677340 Attachment 677339
uggh im haveing such a hard time with colors these suck so bad
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TO WORK ON
*texture...because all the textures on these are terrible
*colors....lots of work here. *helps if the moniters would be clabraited the same
*lines...these probably need help
*space...fix the others this might work better
* time managment...dang u lounge
ill post sketches and other stuff tomorrow im to upset to right now..
very cool man, geting better, goooood pencils keep those up, I like an sp painting and environs. You say you need to work on textures and lines on environments, on my opinion you should pay more attention to color, COLOR is the primary thing. Try painting only with a big brush on your photo studies, that should keep you away from small details and you would care much more of the colour. Thats for my advices dont stop man and ull become awsome, good luck
Heres some more color work, i had around 10 Pages of figure work and faces but i lost my SB o well its more about getting something done anyway still though
kind of old color studys from WU Attachment 693032
And another more advanced still life iv given up on .....maybe plaid was a bad choice to study right now .... Attachment 693067
And if anyone could help with this im developing a kind of cartoonishh color scheme/ style for this stuff and i honestly don't know why ...probably due to lack of color knowledge please if any one has any pointers
Keep studying! I think you could try painting less complicated still lifes when ur studying colour. I found that if i have lots of objects to paint in one picture and when i fail with one of that objects i just give up on other ones and want to finish the piece faster. I suggest try sometimes to set a still-life only from one object and some kindof background, that shouldnt mess ur mind so much than a bigger amount of things. For example: Bring a lemon on a blue drapery, and study the shit out of it, try your hardest to mix colours as they are, reflection of the drapery on the lemon, hues, contrasts, lightening, make a very simple picture but realistic.
Thats for my pointers I need to go back to school now...