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    Fayle's first Sketchbook!

    Hi,

    this is my first post here.

    I'm trying to improve my drawing skills to apply for a university of art and design in Germany next year.

    I'll try to improve my skills every day, so you'll see hopefully a lot of better work in the next weeks.

    So please write what you think about it!

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    Last edited by Fayle; December 22nd, 2007 at 06:20 PM.
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    The first image, the fruit is very good, i really like it.

    I think that a lot could be done to the cat, your clean style is very nice but the cat lacks depth, I think that you need a stronger light source for the Cat, this would help you define for forms of the cat more (for example, a light coming from the left or right, so the shadows and forms of the cat would be easily definable )

    i hope that makes some sense. i like your pencil work as well.

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    New pics

    Hi there,
    thank you for your critique.
    I agree with you... I'll try to improve the light next time.
    I'm currently in a head painting/drawing course, so here are some pics:


    last week:

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    this week:
    the girl took about 20 minutes, the boy 10 minutes

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    nature sketch:

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    C&C are welcome!

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    yo dude! nice start u have there... how long have u been drawing now?
    its good to see someone here with the same goal as me, good luck with gettign into college

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    Hi there,

    @ ajvenema: I'm drawing now seriously since half a year, but it has been my hobby since I was able to do it . Good luck for your goal, too!

    I've some new to show for you

    today it was my third head-drawing lesson, and here are my results:

    about 2x15min:

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    about 10 min:

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    animal-scull drawing:

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    Please C&C

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    Hi!

    here are my newest 2 Watercolor Pictures


    Please write what you think about it!



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    I love them, i havnt draw for so long so its hard for me to give any good advices but to say it´s wonderful and draw more , more and more .

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    i love your stuffs mate, altho it seems as if we have a common problem wich is with giving stuffs the right texture to enhanse the curves and forms of something, like FlyingFins alrdy mentioned. i think it is extremely hard to see the shades in my head and then applicate em in a natural way.. but as they say practise makes perfect, atleast i hope so.

    love your watercolor work mate, keep the good work up

    Click here to see my scetchbook
    it is a variation between pen/pencils and tattoo's and might contain some nudity
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    Thanks for your comments!

    @ramoraz: I agree ....I think the only way to improve this is working hard on it



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    New pictures

    Please C&C

    Watercolor:

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    10 minutes for each guy:

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    singular lines could realy help you i think, overall a good sketch book some great work in here, anatomy is a little off in some areas but not 100% so you could iron that out with a fiew studies on your weak areas. i'll leave you to spot them so you can see for your self where and what you need to do!

    ~

    Great work keep it up! i can see your getting to the standard you need to be with work !

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    Hi there!

    Thanks for your critique JRStagg
    I had not so much time for drawing in the last days but here is my newest work!

    About 5-15 minutes for each one:

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    Hi,
    here are some new pics after some stressful weeks!

    All about 10-15 minutes in head drawing class:


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    Please C&C

    Cheers Fayle

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    Hi!
    here some new stuff I did yesterday

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    new stuff!

    Hi there,
    at the moment I'm trying to get better in digital painting...not so easy




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    Hi, some new sb scans
    Please C&C
    Cheers Fayle


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    new paintings :)

    Hi there,

    some new digi-paintings after a longer break.
    Please feel free to tell me your opinion


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