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    Fragile Things

    Sorry if I am posting too many pics in different threads! I am not sure if I should put them all in one or if that is even possible!
    Here is another from a Monthly challenge.
    Please let me know what you think!
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    Can someone tell me how to reduce the size of the attachments please. It was never this large when posted before!! I apologize for this!
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    Here y'go. I changed the image size in PShop to 600x661.
    You are a level 8 ninja and even though you have a lot of weapons sometimes your ninja moves are your most powerful.
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    I like the concept but everything looks like it's on the same plane. Hard to distinguish space between background, middleground and foreground. Everything is rendered equally.

    I think maybe the guy w/his back to us could be a bit closer to the camera. I'm not sure if I like the idea of cropping off both characters in the image plane, I think you could put more of the guy on the right in there, like he's leaning over a bit more.

    I desaturated and blurred the background (except the guy in water's face)a bit to see if I could separate the planes more. Also the foreground guy made bigger, darker and a bit more saturated.
    You are a level 8 ninja and even though you have a lot of weapons sometimes your ninja moves are your most powerful.
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