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October 25th, 2007 #1
(UPDATE June 29th) I can has crits now?
*UPDATE* Link to my live show, critique me WHILE I work!
EVERY NIGHT AT 11 P.M.
This is my first post.
Hi, I'm Shaun. I'm 18 and I, of course, want to be a Concept Artist like the billion other people who sign up...
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October 27th, 2007 #3Registered User
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- Santa Monica, CA
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Great line weight and quality in that self portrait! I'm guessing it is a self portrait at least hehe... nice start, let's see mooorrreee
With the figure watch out with shading along the edges, it will make it look more flat! With studies, you'll see the basic shapes and with squinting, see the overall light hierarchy ! blah I'm bad with explaining, but keep it up!
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January 8th, 2008 #7
Nice rendering on the bells! And the other paintings look nice too!
Keep it up!
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April 1st, 2008 #11
Nice stuff you got here mate Keep it up want to se more
April 1st, 2008 #12
Hi nice stuff just post everything
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May 7th, 2008 #20
Nice efforts so far. I look forward to meeting you at the next sketch-group. I love to critique so the more you update your SB, the more I will respond
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May 11th, 2008 #22
keep it up!
sketchbook updated October 6th
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May 16th, 2008 #24
Great angle on the dragon! let that gold color bounce onto the creature. Differentiate the colors of the environment near the viewer and the parts farther away. Finish this one!
May 16th, 2008 #25
Come on just finish the dragon. You've got some hours left.
I really like the composition. I think it is one of the best compositions in this TC round ! Just create a nice rendering and my vote is yours
May 16th, 2008 #26
Love those charcoal (am I right?) still lifes and other studies!
As for painting, its going along nicely! Just try to avoid unintentional smudgy edges, try to sharpen it a bit.
Oh and as for dragon: Same what MarkWinters told you!
May 16th, 2008 #27
hey there fellow SSG-er! I dig how youfind shapes thru color in that last WIP, its too bad if you dont finish it...
Compositionally speaking, I like how the tail's arc resonates with the direction of the wings, I think personally I would tilt the head upward on the dragon to give it more... oompf? also, I second Mark on the reflected light comment, and I'd tone down the yellow in the foreground a notch, to draw attention/saturation to the main subject; the Dragon.
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