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    The Dancer

    The Dancer



    One fun day in the park. Oil on canvas. 16x20 i believe
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    Umm... where's the dancer?
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    You chose quite a dirty color pallete and I would definetly not use black.
    The composition could be more exciting if you chose to paint abstract. The head is nearly vertically centered but not completely what makes it look like a mistake. the other body parts having the same distance from head and canvas boarder and do not vary in thickness or intensity, so there is no real movement which is kinda unfortunate for a dancer.
    Maybe try some compositions first! Good luck!
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