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    WIP lion paint

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    With My New Sketchbook

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    Some nice stuff in general and good proportions on the figures. Watch your line weight though!

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    PerinGalitte:Thanks to visit my sketchbook !.
    I need more practice jeje

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    i feel me soo bad
    i spend alot time in the challenge #61 of the IDW and i dont like me the final image.

    Feel you free to critic or coment my work!




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    wuoolas! jejeje, oye,primero, gracias por pasarte y emm
    después... unos pequeños consejos,,, se ve que tienes hartos estudios y experimentillos con líneas y contornos y gestures,,, bueeno, tu sb está desde octubre del 2007 y encuentro que tienes muy pocos comentarios pero esto no es pq tus dibujos son malos, sino que creo es por lo que uno ve. Te recomiendo que los experimentos, gestures,,, los hagas más chicos , por ejemplo en el comentario 8. Y más grande dejas los que están más finalizados como los huesos y ese caballo, además del león entre otros...
    y agregar dibujos más finalizados igual ayuda (como los que tenía yo en el primer post )

    esop, creo que podría ayudar...
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    pd. ahh se me olvidó decir lo de ayudar y criticas,,, es corto pero para mi es importante , que esos ejercicios SI que me ayudan, y harto a dibujar dsps, me ayudan con lo de la línea...

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    great job, ur pretty good^^
    nice studies, im really curius on how you did this one though
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    Clodioz: GRACIAS POR DARTE UNA VUELTA EN MI SKETCHBOOK MEN, PSS, EN REALIDAD NO POSTEO MUCHO PORQUE EL INGLES ME LIMITA Y AVECES PIENSO QUE LOS USUARIOS NO ME ENTENDERIAN, PERO TIENES RAZON EN TODO, DEBO HACER MAS COMENTARIOS Y TRATAR DE PONER TRABAJOS MAS TERMINADOS , Y SI ESTAS VIENDO ESTE POST, TE DARAS CUENTA QUE YA EMPECE A TRABAJAR EN ESO JEJE..
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    The last black and white studies are really good, just keep studying. Try not going loose in every drawing, it helps when it comes to find a gesture but then maybe you can refine some areas you find interesting.
    The anatomy studies are really good too, especially the horse skull, i would like to see some of your other pieces with the same treatment.
    Anyways, keep working, keep postin'

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    Good loose lines but I do agree with Diego, try to tighten some of those pieces. Keep doing those anatomy and fruit studies. The B&W look cool and I like the portrait on the left a lot.

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    Vary nice work, your studies will pay off. IMO: you anatomy is great, just the line work needs some help, that comes with time. Lately I have been spees sketching on my wacom, about 100
    little sketches a day, when I look back in my sketch book, I can see a great improvement. Keep it up, I will subscribe

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    Your speed paintings turn good! I like your anatomy studies, but sometimes you should try to make few clear lines instead of many mixed lines. It's better to understand forms. Never give up and keep posting!

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    Se nota que vas mejorando con lo de tu anatomia y proporciones. Estoy de acuerdo de que tienes q mejorar tu linea con una mas sencilla en vez de trazar muchas, eso te ayudara a tener mas confianza en tus lineas.
    Los ejercicios de blanco y negro, estan muy buenos. Ve entiendo como la luz describe a las formas y usa este entendimiento para cuando hagas tus dibujos a color. Sigue adelante!

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    Thanks to all by the feedback!.

    Diego
    Hello men, I dont have much time to do all my drawings as those of the skull of the horse but I will strive for my work have more quality, thanks for comment.


    Trashy
    Thanks by the coments and of course That follow force me to do more studies and also black and white color

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    Nice to se you again!, haha thanks men, im flattered i am going to practice more hard to be better!.


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    Nice to se you again men!, haha thanks, im flattered and i think that you have a reason about mi art line, sometimes only draw, i dont have any kind of objective , and for me doesnt matter the result of my draw, i enjoy but the problem is when i trying to Imitate to copy a sstylize i cant do.

    Maestro Andres Gracias por darte una vuelta por mi sketchbook
    Acerca de mi trazos, desgraciadamente me quede con la idea del dibujo ciego en donde los trazos enriquecen las formas, donde la observacion es mas importante, tengo el problema de que no se sintetizar mis trazos, pero voy a procurar que mis proximos ejercicios contengan lineas más seguras!.
    Acerca de las pinturas blanco y negro.. gracias!!, es la primera vez que me animo a realizar este tipo de ejercicios y veo que si ayudan mucho, procurare hacer más!. Saludos

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    bad animation

    project.. animation of the week
    is not the best but i am going to fixed in the week

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    keep doing those studie!, theyr looking great, keep drawing n keep posting!

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    really good start here. some of your sketches seem a little rushed. try to slow down and really analyze the form/shape your drawing.
    generally good stuff man. keep it up!

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    Heya MARMENTIDO!
    Thanks for hopping by my sketchbook.
    Those are some pretty nice experiments in post #9. Great to see you're trying out all kinds of media and methods. You're doing a great job on that.
    But try to take your time for some thorough sketching too! Like GusTheRobot said, you seem a bit rushed. I think it would really help you and start out easy, sketching a bit, until you get the shapes you were looking for. Don't worry about details early on.

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    Very nicely done I like the textures in your paintings and the textures are wonderful aswell. Also the inks are nice. Overall very well done, keep an eye on the way you use contrast though, makesure you are using it as a tool to your advantage rather than ignoring it. Keep it up asnd some finished pieces wouyld be nice
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    Some Movements

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