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    J.Glaser's pictures that tell stories and other images that may be confused with art

    Gotta start posting here again. I've replaced those RTM pages with a newer painting I did for a pitch.
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    cool. Nice solid linework - and an interesting story and characters.

    The only thing I can nitpick about is the perspective on the first panel panning down from the top of the town to the bottom of the characters. The perspective seems to be either too distorted, or not distorted enougth, or there is not enough evidence of perspective lines through detailed scenery to convince my eyes of the illusion. Hope this helps.

    My sketchbook is here

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    I agree with softocean, the linework is very good.
    I like your realistic middle age buildings
    I live to draw...
    hopefully someday i´ll draw to live (earn money with it )
    My NEW [No more GORE] Sketchbook! Come and Crit!

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    i love those!
    imagine how they will look when its fully inked and coloured..
    keep posting!

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    Character for shirt

    Worked out this character for a t-shirt design... Pencils and inks...

    softocean, MilesNoctis, Frank .. thanks for the comments and crits!

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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    those pages look great jacob
    cant wait to see color!

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    CoW #116

    This is my sub for CoW #116

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    Wip

    So I am probably using my sketchbook in the wrong way... but I dont really feel like having a buncha different threads.. One for sketchbook, one for WIP, one for finials.. anyhow.. I'll take opinions if you've got em on the matter... This is a WIP I'm gonna paint it up I left the feathers kinda open so I can play with texture in PS... It's going to be a self promo piece kind of a banner type of thing...

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    So... in an effort to work up my painting skills I am trying out some still lifes starting with the apple exercise. I stayed true and did not allow myself to use blending modes to mix colors.

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    A couple of robot designs... I got the 6D pen.. I didnt use it on these however, I'll have something soon.

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    sooo...I guess this will be my first actual sketchbook entry in my sketchbook.. I'm going to try to make it more of a habit. YAY? Some of it is pencil (from my sketch book) and a few are me screwin around with the 6D pen in PS.

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    great linework! and i really love the chinese face top left in your last one...great!

    Maybe work a bit on your values in your colored work...most of them could use
    more value difference...for example the very first one in your first post, it looses
    the focus a bit because the values are quite similar...it would work better if you
    push back the dragon and the girl further back with darker colors...to get the
    focus more on the guy which could be a little more saturated...........hope you know what i mean...

    keep em comin!!

    Cheers

    Andi

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    Great line work. Combined with your black placement, it establishes the form well. Keep it up!

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    Those pencils look really nice. Can we see a bit bigger scans?

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    ok.. todays sketchbook entry.. kinda lazy.. yes.. but here it is. Also my thumbs for a new comic pitch I am working on.

    Delmar (Andi) - Thank you for the constructive crit. I agree.. I need more lighting drama in my painted work.

    Senira - ty

    VilleK- I assume you mean the inked pages.. yeah they are a bit too small.. I will reload larger scans soon.

    I need to start drawing for Deep... hmmm...

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