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October 18th, 2007 #1
J.Glaser's pictures that tell stories and other images that may be confused with art
Gotta start posting here again. I've replaced those RTM pages with a newer painting I did for a pitch.
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Hide this ad by registering as a memberOctober 22nd, 2007 #2Registered User
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cool. Nice solid linework - and an interesting story and characters.
The only thing I can nitpick about is the perspective on the first panel panning down from the top of the town to the bottom of the characters. The perspective seems to be either too distorted, or not distorted enougth, or there is not enough evidence of perspective lines through detailed scenery to convince my eyes of the illusion. Hope this helps.
My sketchbook is here
October 22nd, 2007 #3
I agree with softocean, the linework is very good.
I like your realistic middle age buildingsI live to draw...
hopefully someday i´ll draw to live (earn money with it )
My NEW [No more GORE] Sketchbook! Come and Crit!
October 22nd, 2007 #4
i love those!
imagine how they will look when its fully inked and coloured..
October 26th, 2007 #5
Character for shirt
Worked out this character for a t-shirt design... Pencils and inks...
softocean, MilesNoctis, Frank .. thanks for the comments and crits!
October 26th, 2007 #6
April 27th, 2008 #7
May 1st, 2008 #8
So I am probably using my sketchbook in the wrong way... but I dont really feel like having a buncha different threads.. One for sketchbook, one for WIP, one for finials.. anyhow.. I'll take opinions if you've got em on the matter... This is a WIP I'm gonna paint it up I left the feathers kinda open so I can play with texture in PS... It's going to be a self promo piece kind of a banner type of thing...
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May 14th, 2008 #12
great linework! and i really love the chinese face top left in your last one...great!
Maybe work a bit on your values in your colored work...most of them could use
more value difference...for example the very first one in your first post, it looses
the focus a bit because the values are quite similar...it would work better if you
push back the dragon and the girl further back with darker colors...to get the
focus more on the guy which could be a little more saturated...........hope you know what i mean...
keep em comin!!
May 14th, 2008 #13
May 14th, 2008 #14Freelancer
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Those pencils look really nice. Can we see a bit bigger scans?
May 15th, 2008 #15
ok.. todays sketchbook entry.. kinda lazy.. yes.. but here it is. Also my thumbs for a new comic pitch I am working on.
Delmar (Andi) - Thank you for the constructive crit. I agree.. I need more lighting drama in my painted work.
Senira - ty
VilleK- I assume you mean the inked pages.. yeah they are a bit too small.. I will reload larger scans soon.
I need to start drawing for Deep... hmmm...
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