Im learning painter and this is a quick doodle I just made.
First, that face shouldn't have a long slender highlight cutting the face in half. Secondly, why is you drawing light and sketchy but your background solid, sharp and an ugly green?
Doodles need some compostional love too, you know.
Still trying to think of a clever saying.
Homocide and Apple Liquid: A Sketchbook
Appleside- you probably are finding that light spot alond the cheek distracting, but if I remove it the face becomes very flat.