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    First "manga-ish" work

    After a long while, I decided to give the manga style a try,as I´ve got a small commission for a kinda manga-ish game. I know it´s nothing great, but what do you think?


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    You need to decide whether this is a painting or a colored drawing.
    Also, that hand needs to be defined better, at first glance it's hard to tell if he has any arms.

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    why is the lettering above the character so blurry? i'm not sure it looks like its the language from lord of the rings. if you want to say something with the words then they should be clear, otherwise they really don't need to be in this piece
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    Those black outlines need to be thinned out or removed entirely. I like his costume though.
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    Elwell: Agreed, it´s hard for me to simple fill a drawing, as I´m used to actually paint and forget about line.

    Dabaers: it´s just a cool type, nothing special, I wanted them to emphasize the point of interest of the hand, but perhaps the composition doesn´t need them.

    Interceptor: the line needs a better study, but I´m happy with my first attempt. I´ll try to improve the line work in future illustrations.

    Btw, thank you all for your opinions.

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