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    Hydranthro with Erection crappy shit mutagene

    Last edited by Cryoxzonomony; August 8th, 2008 at 10:01 AM.
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    of course it sucks yet coz its just pencil
    Thats not a good excuse, there are tons of great pencil drawings.

    Its pretty interesting, lots of crazy details.

    Dont be so down about your work, improvement is a process.

    For starters the composition is rather lacking, the figure (the monster) is centered on the page, and the limb/pipe is dividing the page horizontally. Basically you've created a big crosshair right into the middle of the page and it doesnt help the eye move around the artwork. You need more of a background, and you need a light source. Right now hes just kinda all grayed out and the same value all around. Very creepy subject matter, its cool.

    Keep it up man you'll get where you wanna go, just dont make excuses about the medium, any medium can make something amazing, you just gotta practice with it.

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    yea well that text sometimes i type just something, i think yet that means than its unfinished pic and its flat w. i dont add light sources or dynamic detail on pen state only when color on photoshoop also im really too lazy to put background unless i decide to make album cover type shit

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    Um.. I'm sorry, I know english may not be your first language, but I don't really understand much of what you are saying in your initial post.

    Second, boobs are not erotic. Perhaps the pipe is phallic, but if that were the case it should be directed upwards in some fashion.

    The hand holding the gun lacks structure, and I'm trying to figure out... Are we looking at a large muscle mass, or a mass of boils and disease? If it is alot of musclature we are observing, try to use reference to place muscles that make more sense... random curvy flaps really take away from the believability (thus the creepiness) of the pic.

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    Hi, work more with lights and shadows.
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    You definitely need to work on proportions of the human body even if it is a mutated one. I would also suggest when you do your shading that you be more subtle with it. Right now you look like you are over compensating right now to give it mass but this really doesn't help it. Also using color paper as the mid tones is a great way to help you train this way that way you just use a white color pencil, conte crayon, or what have you for the highlights and black for the shading. It will pop more than you think and you will be pleasantly surprised.


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    Super anwernsment muculation

    Um.. I'm sorry, I know english may not be your first language, but I don't really understand much of what you are saying in your initial post.

    Second, boobs are not erotic. Perhaps the pipe is phallic, but if that were the case it should be directed upwards in some fashion.
    about shitty english i think the reason is ive typed too much english so i get really dumped and dont wanna type right.

    (Erotica Xenoprmc) i think thats really overreacted already wt i hate so i figure out some better name


    You definitely need to work on proportions of the human body even if it is a mutated one. I would also suggest when you do your shading that you be more subtle with it. Right now you look like you are over compensating right now to give it mass but this really doesn't help it
    its not supposed to be human body and i dont usually do huge dynamic shading on pictures which are planned to be painted in photoshop, easier to make shadows in it

    The hand holding the gun lacks structure, and I'm trying to figure out... Are we looking at a large muscle mass, or a mass of boils and disease? If it is alot of musclature we are observing, try to use reference to place muscles that make more sense... random curvy flaps really take away from the believability (thus the creepiness) of the pic.
    yea i hate that hand too, gonna try remake it in photoshop someday. And the right shoulder, the weird extra-musculary is because the armor is symbiosed into shoulder with bacteric toxoa

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    I wasnt talking about the shoulder, I meant the whole thing; the chest area specifically, but the entire image is like that.

    Look up the posts of a member named

    wanimal

    you will like it I bet.

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    well i kno his stuff already, really detailed and i like also the sadomasochismo themes on first pics but hes graduated from art-school and ive never been in any and surely wont go anywhere.

    Also than i dont draw humans and i dont care much about exact anatomy unless i draw another anthrofemale. only thing i find most annoying than i cant draw sex, well i remember ive made mostly only "furryporn" but i dont make it anymore coz it sucks. another exception is that insect sex pic and some other detail stuff which i dont remember

    am already making "cthulhu" creature coz i like more theme stuff than those.

    oh well always the musculary is weird as shit if i try do but i still try paint that better, its not supposed to be "creepy" w i think it looks funny

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    shit color update w

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    Wow...
    I am not really reading "erotic" from any of your images. Just because you slap on breasts or an erect penis doesn't really make it erotic...

    1. arousing or satisfying sexual desire: an erotic dance.
    2. of, pertaining to, or treating of sexual love; amatory: an erotic novel.
    3. subject to or marked by strong sexual desire.

    I am not really getting any of those. Also, the form is really convoluted. You might want to vary some line weight to show the form better.

    It is ok if you dont want to draw humans, but doing so will give you a better understanding of anatomy that you can apply to these things.

    Your posts are written so poorly it is hard to make sense of them.

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    yea well i dunno why i slap "erotic" on posts anyway too, sometime it feels so stupid. i really dunno how to categorize every crap i post. u dont know how hard i have to type english just because i type english everyday so i get really really bored so typing shit.

    i had to post something on this critic forum just for fun so i made silly boobs/penis reptile. next time i make something more better and less silly, although i still try make something from that

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    Hmmm... In my view I must agree with the anotamy problems, secondly, what are you trying to say with this little mongrel. Is erotic, not really, a bit messy I would say.

    Try and shape up the anatomy of the creature. I think that would solve a lot of basic problems. Especially the chest and shoulder area.

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    i think i rather use that as trying to improve more the photoshop painting technigue which am using. of course i can always reshape it and make different lighting

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    super ass update, oh well now its too much skin and too simple. next time i post lots of better stuff include Corpsedisposal Aeon Shaman, some technology pimped Multiradiation carbonizing Elektroenergy Elemental Female although i still cant make so complex pose whatever i dont care

    i know someone surely didnt understand so i mean next time i make WIP thread for couple of new dump im making and gonna add there lots of pics.
    Not in critique center w i have this funny thread already

    off-topic: ahh i hate that mysql error, i cant change my signature removing that stupid sketchbook junkyard, archive of over-boarded crap stuff asfjhdg

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    Artrage 2/Photoshop painted some "simple" reptilian from some of my old shit drawing, i know it looks shitty. his partner

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