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Thread: My First Post to ConceptART.
October 5th, 2007 #1
My First Post to ConceptART.
used over 10 hour to do this drawing here. sketching and colouring using photoshop cs2
any comment will do
Last edited by kenase2008; October 5th, 2007 at 06:04 AM. Reason: wrong information
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Nice work. Umm one suggestion, try staying away from coloring for now, even though its very tempting .ANd start working on those figures.I dont want to specific crits, becuase I think working on the larger issue will help you more than just correcting the peice. so get yourself books on figure drawing, anatomy, and such by guys like andrew loomis, bridgeman, hogarth. These booka re available for free online too.
and cheap print versions through dover publications.Also try staying away from stylizations for the time being.style will come on its own just stay sincere towards your art.
October 5th, 2007 #3
bhanu's got great advice there.
Specifically, that left hand aint right. Check the buldge on the outer hand part, its at the bottom of the hand there. Also the upper right arm doesn't work to well (i think its the foreshortening or just bad anatomy). Studying more anatomy would definitley help overall as bhanu suggested already.
hope that helped a bit
October 5th, 2007 #4BANNED_For_POOPY_PANTS Guest
Some great advice here so far.
I really like the pic, but it seems like Anime-ish style images like these sometimes benefit from more minimalism in terms of color usage, rendering and linework.
There are many things to improve here, but what stands out the most is the anatomy issue. However, for your first post it's pretty badass . I love the character's expression.
Cheers (and keep posting!),
October 5th, 2007 #5
The linework is nice and clean (on the whole, except for a few places on the neck), and the color is handled simply but pretty well. But it's obvious that there are a lot of places in the anatomy and drapery where you're throwing in detail for its own sake without really knowing what you're doing.
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October 5th, 2007 #6
ok . i noticed too my anotomy is not right at all. thx for the advise . i will try my best to take your advise . and also i will post my drawing here so maybe u all can help to give more comment and how to improve myself more . thank alot.
October 7th, 2007 #7
umm do one thing start a sb, and star posting your studies, paintings sketches , umm everythign arty there, there we can check the progress and help you grow as well.
October 7th, 2007 #8