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    Red face Breaking the Balance

    I just joined this site and thought i should jump in and just post something.

    Edit: i wanted to leave this open for interpretation but It was suggested that i explain this concept.

    This is done for collaborative project and there are series of illustrations. This is the 11th piece for the project. In the previous piece the boy seeks out to get justice...the symbol of justice is usually represtented with a scale; instead of a scale i used two swings attached to a tree. The boy is trying to get even for what the girl did to him (he is going to break a natural balance in order to achieve what he truly desires). I would post the entire thing but half the pieces in the project belong to my partner and they are not interested in posting online.

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    I really think you should leave the type out of the picture. The color is good, but don't like too much radioactive green. I would try adding more detail to the background if I were you! I like the symmetry in this piece. Overall, a nice idea, but I feel you can add to it to make it better!

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    I can't see it.

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    i think its visible now

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    Quote Originally Posted by BunnyGrandravine View Post
    i think its visible now
    Oh, now I can see! It's awesome. I 100% agree with getting rid of the font/text, if you do that you have a solid piece of work, dude. Keep it up.

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    Perhaps Put "Breaking" about "The Balance", and making it all a bit better to fill up that space? That's one of those things that you honestly don't know if it'll work until you do it.
    Really tight design, and like the integration of texture. I'd only suggest perhaps putting some subtle rays around the sun on the left side, since it's too similar to the moon shape on the right. Very nice rendering, and good synthesis of illustration and design.

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