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    (mostly) subway sketches

    hi everyone,

    this is my first post here and i hope it helps motivate me to make (and post) more stuff. critique and feedback most welcome!! thanks in advance..

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    here is a color study--about 3 1/2 hours. The first one is just blocking in the color, but i thought it looked kinda nice, and 2nd is rendered. (could still use some work tho..)

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    char. design.. will color this soon.

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    Good start you've got going here! I think you started with too saturated colors but they look okay in the rendered version (although the background is a little distracting... i kind of like it anyway) Really like that robot! Keep posting.

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    interesting. it kind of reminds meof the old kind of comics books that were published here in Sweden. I agree with fishspawn that the bg is distracting but it seems that you are off to a good start here. Keep a it

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    thanks fishspawn & buckster! will def'ly try to post more from now on. this is another subway sketch.. i feel like a lot of time my drawings of people are so unexpressive, it's sthing i want to work on..

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    more sketch.

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    Love the first sketch from the latest batch. Too bad I'm not qualified to also come up with a reason
    People on subways tend to put on dull expressions, so lack of those probably isn't your fault...

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    mutant turtle.. not ninja or teenage. thoughts? anyone??

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    I like the turtle alot! He's going to get more shading and texture right? I want to see that.

    I like your subway drawings tons. Nice stuff!

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    thanks! here is color version..

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    Nice studies! I absolutely love drawing on the subway (or the tube as we call it in London!) it's a really great place to draw. To offer some crit I would say that the turtle feels a little pasted on to the last image, i.e. he doesn't seem to be on the same perspective plane as the background or the girl. Getting perspective right is something I find quite difficult also and takes practice.

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    Yay, subway sketches!
    I like your lines a lot, and your style looks pretty cool. You cought their personalities very well. (Although I cannot tell, as I didn't sit beside you ;D )
    One suggestion: Sometimes you might want draw what you actually see, not what you think you see in the subway. For practice. To develop your own style, the ones you got are great.

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