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    Did this sketch in about a half an hour in Painter X. I'd really like some crits on my anatomy as I want to get much better at it. I'll upload some pencil sketches soon also. Thanks so much,
    Sam

    Oh, and as you all know, all crits are welcome and it is encouraged not to be gentle

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    I like it rough lol

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    dear Sam
    look at real people
    this looks likethe shouldres and torso of a guy with grapefruits plastered on... verY like michael angelo
    you should think more abotu the under lying in structure
    and don't shy away from the hips and pubic region.
    the balance of the hips is the key to telling the guys from the girls . girls have wider hips narrower waists

    in general we don't put large flashy signatures on sketches

    start a sketchbook
    practice anatomy alot

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    Okay, so a thinner waste, and less masculine shoulder's, and I'll remember not to add a huge signature for a sketch.

    How's this?

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    a little better ..not much. look at ref . the position of the left arm is painfull if possible. the hand is deformed and your lines are very sketchy and tentative
    do 100 of these ... from ref.. and you might start to understandthe underlying structures

    I don't mean to be harsh or dismiss you. bu tyou would be nbetter off doing another rather than trying to fix this one. It takes a lot of observation and practice to understand how bodies are put togehther

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    Thank you, and you are not being "harsh" at all. I need some decent, and not gentle crits, so thank you very much. I'll post something more tommorow, i'll see if I can find a reference in a similar pose, if not I'll just do something completely different. Again thank you

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