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    New Thread for updated work

    This is a rough sketch of Abby, and im not sure if anyone remembers but this is my character for a manga that im going to create in the far future. Ive been working on this story for a year, and since im 17 and can take my time, im just working on my style right now, and trying to get my main character settled. I struggle with drawing, so I hope you will critique as much as necessary. I only like constructive criticism. Ty
    Here she is..



    and heres a finished bit:



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    Those are really great!
    But the arms one the first one is out of proportions.
    The left leg on the second one is broken,adn the foot is in some akward position.
    The right leg of the same huge in comparisation the the other leg.
    And the face (still the second one) does not follow the angle of the head.
    Try to get those right and it'll be great!

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    work on hands, until you bleed. anyone can draw a face!
    i suggest getting the barbara bradley book for clothed figure, and also some anatomy books.
    read and copy those suckers.
    keep up sketching and practicing.

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    I agree with hands being a problem. The first one also seems to have weird boobs (her right one kinda starts too far into the arm) and there's something funky going on with her waist, I don't really get if that's a t-shirt that shows her belly and the lower part of her back or not.

    As for the second one her face seems to be too small for her head and maybe make her chin more pointy.

    Anyways, I like the overall look of the second one better.

    Last edited by The Whistler; September 8th, 2007 at 03:17 PM. Reason: wrong spelling
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    Thankyou everyone! all your criticism will be taken into consideration.

    Also: Im working on a project, youll understand why i call it that when im finished.. But for now, i just started and need some criticism on how im doing so far with the anatomy, im a bit paranoid, so it could be fine..But before i continue..



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    still very choppy and sketchy..couldnt fit on the feet- but ill fix that



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