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    Meds' sketchbook/a beginner looking for advice and critiques

    I am a new artist and have been drawing for a little more than a year. I have not taken an art class since I was in the 8th grade, so I am trying to use all the resources that I possibly can to learn and that is why I am here. I have been on deviantart for about a year, but realized that I really need to learn the basics and could use some good critiques. So, here are my first sketches:

    Here is a silent hill fanart and two colored versions.

    All critiques are welcome. My personal goal is to try to do some type of daily sketch and at the moment I am focusing on anatomy.
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    i like the first sketch, but i think when you added colour the face came out looking less peaceful than in the original. theres something about the nose i dont like, i think you need to add a bit of shading on the side so it doesnt look like her nose comes down flat on the side, and maybe work with the shape of the lips a bit more to make them look more natural.

    good start though!
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    Thanks! I got my first critique. This character is anything but peaceful, but I can definitely see your point when comparing the sketch with the colored version. I will see if I can add some more shading to the nose area. Lips have been a constant struggle for me even if I use a reference, so I may just need to break down and study them. Thanks again!
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    Here are some new sketches.

    1. I practiced some lips, drew my goldie named Beluga and drew a quick portrait while watching tv. I was watching Judge Judy. Hahahaha!
    2. This is my mom's cat, Solomon
    3. just some quick practice sketches
    4 All of the last sketches are for a friend who is writing a book and needs help coming up with a creature design. She gave me some of her ideas and I am in the very early stages of putting something together for her. They are kind of crappy, but hopefully this is a start.
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    Here are a few more pictures that I was able to work on when I had some vacation time from work. The last picture shows some changes I made to an earlier picture after receiving some critiques. Critiques are welcome as always!
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    Heys meds welcome to the boards

    to me, the main problem areas are proportion and volume. though i think thats the same with everyone...I can see you are using basic shapes to block out the figure and thats good, however they are flat shapes, you really need to think about volume and depth. how does that shape curve around in space?

    watch that you dont rely on your outline too much, make sure you pay just as much attention to what is between the lines.

    the changes you made to the figure with the red hair are great

    also watch the super soft rendering, mix it up a bit and dont be afraid to get loose with your linework...i guess what i mean is dont be too precious, get some energy in there!


    hope i helped...ah, sorry if i confused you

    keep it up!
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    Thank you! Your comment did make sense, and it is also very helpful. I think a lot of what you said about lines, volume and proportions are things that I just recently started to realize were a problem, and it is good to hear someone point that out. I appreciate it. It is also good to know that I made some improvements on the redhead picture.

    I think before I try to dive into anatomy, I may just need to do some practice pictures of basic shapes to get a better idea of volume and depth, like you said. Thanks again!
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    I found the new mentoring thread, and I am now seeking a mentor. If you happen to look at this sketchbook and want to mentor, please let me know. Anyway, I plan to follow along with some of the assignments on the other mentoring threads on my own until I find a mentor. I also plan to attempt the concept art 101 assignments. I will post those sketches here as I do them, but for now here are some other sketches that I have done. There isn't really anything good here, but I should show what I have worked on. The unfinished face is the only one I drew from life, but he got up and left so I couldn't finish. I plan to do more drawing from life as much as possible.
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    Here is a little exercise I did after reading through one of the mentoring threads. I still think that I am going to have a hard time going from stick figures to fleshy figures, but I assume that is where drawing from life as much as possible is going to help.
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    Really nice work. I like the one with the girl with the hat. It's great that your studying Loomis, it really helps with posture and general figure construction.
    Keep it up!
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    Thank you! I have a lot more studying to do when it comes to anatomy and posture, but I am determined.
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    Here are more studies. I am now participating in one of the mentoring threads, and the first picture was part of an assignment. The second picture was a request from a friend. A reference picture was used. Unfortunately there are a lot of things that are wrong, but I guess I will learn for the next time.
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    what i see in ur thread, is that some of the things u make, (especially heads) are REALLY good, and others, like bodies are a little less. so focus on that part, and ull become a great drawer
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