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    Hey all - updated page 1 (at top) with my final & would appreciate any C&C's. I'll do my own round of comments this evening...
    Take a look at my series of in-depth critiques, like this one of Salvador Dali's hidden portrait of Lincoln.

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    doesnt seem to be much activity here compared to last week. either people are finding this one a little difficult, or their keeping their ideas safe to their chests and its going to be a mad rush towards the end.

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    I may try to sneak one this in over the weekend, but it's been hell here at work all week so time may not allow it. I have a sketch done monday, but haven't managed to lay any color on it yet at all.

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    nice sketch you got there fuuryoku, just 2 crits though, her left arm looks slightly strange, maybe its to big, also i think her right hand looks slightly to big to be a womans hand. Apart from that it looks great, reminds me of something from a 60's-70's b-movie

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    waking up and coming back to the image ive decided to take replace the cup and take away the damn bathroom sign
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    some nice progress goodluck to everyone! hopefully i can participate lots of other work at the moment

    newman: i really like what you started...some crit...i love the sleevless tux idea, i dont know if ill have time to participate but i was sketching ideas of having a jacket on mine but didnt want to hide the arm design..so your peice was very interesting...also the cigar, he can smoke it?? lol and the robot has a nice gold/copper color except on the tummy? also the knee on the robot looks belt funny...other than that its very nice

    Migsta: fantastic design of the robot...he is very appealing and has a charming eye gaze. cant wait for the finish should be nice

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    critique back is appreciated


    scott - wierd i dont get it.

    migsta - diggin it so far, diggin the flow and coloring.

    daetswon - cool design cant wait to see it colored

    sony - whats with the banner and pear looking object?

    oblio - yup it is missin the mech part of the rendering

    powley - i like it but i hate your smoke and i would like to see more of atleast one character

    crafty - i like his pose what is in his left hand? cellphone?

    active virgin - the hell is that? haha condoms?

    darkar - keep going... i want a watch like that!

    emendez - waiting for progress cool design. his legs looks weird

    coleb - cool render but where is the mech part of the character?

    newman - 1 hr? yeah ok anywayz impressive man good work.

    mathew campbell - good start diggin the idea a lot and the characters design is crazy. i like it and hope to see it finished

    fuuryoku - i like the body of the character but his head looks weird... maybe colord it will be easier to notice.... good sketch non the less

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    Grenogs: yeah, that arm bugs the hell out of me too, but I literally haven't had any sketchtime this week to get back to it and fix it. The bot's head looks a little off kilter too thanks to my effed up astygmatic eyes, though not to as bothersome a degree.

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    I'm going with Deuce Bigalow meets terminator...jk

    wip something like this

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    migsta: Very nice start - I like the robot better than the woman, who seems quite flat in comparison. It's a very expressive robot, whose look seems to be "save me from this fate before I punch her out."

    daestwen: I like the bot, but there's nothing about this that says gigolo to me. The first of many robots smoking. Odd. I like the clear stomach bubble - well done. I think the bot's left arm is too long.

    sony: What's the robot part? Hm. Is the figure the woman? I think it probably is. So the robot is the other shape. While the style is intriguing, I don't really read what's going on.

    oblio: I like the feel, but you do need more mech. Perhaps a series of status lights on his neck. The gigolo part isn't that clear either. The pink slippers are curious...

    powleyman: Her head doesn't seem deep enough to me, despite the style. I like the negative-space strap of her dress, though it's not matched on the other side. If he's sitting, you could move him to the left a bit and show some of his leg on the other side of the woman's head. Not sure what that would do to the composition, but I imagine you're already past that part.

    craftysquid: I like this one a lot. The robot part is subtle and the suave look and pose contrasts with the cheesy aspects, like the endowment. I can't tell what's in his hand - a lighter?

    executivetransvestite: It's Rosie from the Jetson's, gone bad.

    darkardaur: What he's doing with his hands doesn't read well for me. I see the holographic part, which looks cool. The foot he's standing on should be more foreshortened.

    emendez: His right arm and hand are very nice. I like the "hair" also.

    newman: Nice job, especially for one hour.

    matthew campell: The flowers are a nice touch. Makes me wonder if you were at Comic-Con this year - there was a guy wandering the exhibit hall floor with a working TV for a head. It was showing movie previews. I'm still not sure how they set it up. I also like the drab nature - I hope you don't add too many colors.

    fuuryoku: Sorry, I wasn't looking at the robot. The only things I'm seeing others have mentioned already (e.g. hand and arm).

    acro: His cup isn't working - it might be tangents with the bar in the background, but I don't even read it as a separate shape. As far as my entry, I figured that a gigolo-bot would be owned by someone. That someone would have to take it out of the box, set it up, and so on. So, the thing has an instruction manual just like a stereo. This is the page in the manual that diagrams out all the features, and the writing on it is the owner having to call tech support. There's an attract mode (like video games) to pull in the customers, and so on. In the end, the owner junked the bot and threw the manual away. I drew and inked the figure and the heads, and also did the writing. Everything else I did in Visio - a vector graphics and charting program. One other detail: turning one ear controls speed, turning the other how hard the robot is doing whatever it's doing. Any guess on why that would be the ears?
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    Cool stuff so far.

    ACRO: Your robot seems more Pimp than Gigolo. Though I like how curvy and meaty your girl is.

    Newman: Killer stuff dude. I agree, with your earlier comment, conversational skills always win over the ladies, plus customizable dork doesn't hurt either.

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    Hi all. sorry i don't have time to offer crit to everyone who's posted so far, but here's a few:
    matthew campell: really nice moody piece, it's got that bladerunner feel. the guy maybe looks a bit too shabby to be a gigolo? could make his clothes a bit better fitting possibly.
    acro: i like the energy in this one, but maybe unify the colour scheme a bit.
    mime (finals page): great pic, love the neon. bit more prostitute than gigolo though.
    emendez + crafty squid: nice concepts, very suave!

    good luck everyone!
    p.s. what would be the point of a robot smoking? its just for posing!

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    Nice work so far everyone !

    This is my first participation to the CHOW, it is very fun :p

    Matthew Campbell : I guess we had the same idea, look at what I posted in the finished picture thread yesterday, the screen can show whatever face the client wants :p

    Here is my finished version, I already posted it in the finished thread but I thought that I might show it here too.

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    very nice everyone

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    Hello everyone, I don't post a lot, but I very often take a look. Mime show me this thread, so...

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