Join 500,000+ Artists
Its' free and it takes less than 10 seconds!
Well, I thought I'd try a sketchbook. I've mostly lurked here before. I've been a little timid because of the high levels of talent here, but I figured that if I'm going to improve myself I've got to get over it, hehe.
Here is a sketch I did from a photo I found somewhere on the net.
These are some studies from Loomis' book.
Someone told me to do sketches of celebrities since other people would be more likely to catch errors so I did one of Jensen Ackles from Supernatural. I see some errors, like the lips are too far from the nose and other proportional problems I think.
This one is a bicycle charcoal drawing I did in class last semester.
Finally, this one is an oil painting I also did last semester for school.
Last edited by John21; August 23rd, 2007 at 12:49 AM. Reason: Thumbnail upate attempt
Very nice shading, highlights. I'd like to see more anatomy work, ill keep my eye on ur SB.Oh and welcome on CA
throtailer: Thanks! There will be more anatomy stuff definitely.
Here is a skull I did based on a photo that I found in these forums. The first one was a quick sketch to get a feel for it, and the second one is a more refined version where I fixed a lot of my errors from the first one and detailed it more:
I need to draw more regularly...
What a nice shading and detail, i think background are too noisy.. Have nothink to say anymore! Just awesome! Keep it up my friend!
p.s. And ey guys who are reading, comment this guy's sketchbook, his works are so much worth!
p.s. 2 And ey John how old are ya?
throtailer: Thanks very much! I agree that the bg is too noisy. I probably should have spent time trying to smooth it out. To answer your question, I'm 21 years old.
Anyway, here's a another sketch. I struggle drawing women very much for some reason, so I went to the nude reference thread here and found a picture to draw so that I could force myself to work on it. I probably should have spent more time tightening it up, the face especially, but I got bored of it. She was standing in the ocean with a weird rock formation behind her, so that's what the black blob is.
Some more little doodles to add...
What a shading on a woman o_O.. Nice. Doodles are nice too. I like the eye and ring most. I think they took more time for u. nice figure and hand too. And what i dont like is water on girl-one. Cant say anything else.
throtailer: Thanks again! The water is pretty bad in the girl pic, hehe. I looked at the hundreds of waves in the reference picture and was all "forget it, I'm not drawing that." XD I'm planning on doing some water studies later on to help me with that type of thing.
This time I decided to redraw something I drew a couple of years ago from when I first started trying to draw seriously to help get me more motivated to continue drawing by seeing my improvement. It seems to happen so slowly and unnoticably. I wanted to make it similar to the old picture and do it in the same way so I didn't use any references. I figured it was a good one to do after the female study sketch I just did. The anatomy is probably really weird, and the hands were a pain to do without references... I really need to force myself to draw a page or two of hands.
Here are both of them side by side:
I think I need to do a fabric folds study too.
Last edited by John21; August 23rd, 2007 at 08:32 PM.
I'm in the same boat with hands--I'm actually working on a page of them right now, as annoying as it is. The last picture is a definite improvement! I'd be interested to see you do yet another, and this time with reference. I'm really digging how you did her face and hair, and I think with a little anatomy refinement (her hips and legs, mainly) would really make a huge difference. Can't wait to see more!
Hey, nice pieces of work in here so far. Keep on doing those studies. That ref of the girl in the ocean is really good. I think you work well from ref's.
Feel free to checkout my work:
Don't forget to visit the Critique Section!!
* Help a CA artist! Visit the Constructive Critique section! *
Kylana: Thanks a lot! I appreciate the crit on the hips. I'll attempt to fix them, but I'm having trouble finding a picture with a similar pose.
darkchild: Thanks! I'm definitely going to do more stuff with references, although I think I use references as a crutch sometimes.
Anyway, I haven't drawn any long studies yet because of homework, but I did a little bit of color experimentation on the girl pic, and I'm hopefully going to be able to fix the hips more. I think the problem is that they are on a different perspective slant from the upper body, and I don't have a good understanding of how the legs fit into the pelvis.
I'm really awkward with using a tablet because I've only had it a couple of months and it's huge. I told my parents I wanted a small one for my birthday and they surprised me with a $400 9x12 Intuos. O_o I'm grateful to them, but I feel kind of obligated to use it since they did that. Here is the WIP of the colors:
Seeing her without the bottom half makes me realize how enormous the head is relative to the body. >__< The shirt is not blended well yet. I think I might be slightly colorblind, so tell me if the colors look really off with green skin or something like that.
Last edited by John21; August 25th, 2007 at 06:48 PM.
You've clearly got some spiffing skillz; luv that second skull!
Keep drawing!!! Draw from life, draw full-body figures, draw action/movement... The more you do it, the better you'll be
Look, see! Nifty art! http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=99803
Hey! Check out my blog here
Ye, i like the girl and i think shirt is not very bad blended at all. I dont like the eyes(cuz its half-anime style) and i think collar bone and that neck muscles shouldnt be so much poped out. Nice tablet and keep it up! oh and that was only my option dont take it very serious, draw as u like.
when starting a painting i like to throw a background color down so that im not overwhelmed by the white canvas before me.
it seems like your a little timid with the tablet. that will go away with time.
if you paint with it everyday it wont take long at all.
the more comfortable you get the more refined your art will become
I really like the eye in post 6. You've got shading down real well. As for the anatomy and people, just keep plugging away at it! You're off to a good start, so keep drawing.
LIVE FREE. DRAW HARD.
AmontilladoAg: Thanks a lot!
throtailer: Thanks! The anime style influence I think comes from me playing too many videogames. XD
roidvoid: Thanks for the advice on the digital painting. I'm trying to use it more.
Viking Raider: Thank you!
jedininjaman: Thanks! I will try to work on my proportions.
Anyway, school has been taking up a bit of my time so I can't draw as much as I like. Here is the little bit I have for now:
A hand I did from a photo:
My hand I did during class:
Last edited by John21; September 3rd, 2007 at 01:54 AM.
Nice work! That hand is beautifully done.
sweet_sorrow: Thanks! I'm glad the hand looks good.
I updated the demon pic:
I attempted another celebrity portrait. This time it's Sarah Michelle Gellar from Buffy.
Last edited by John21; September 8th, 2007 at 10:37 AM.
Just another quick sheet of head studies based from Loomis' book to add for now.
It's been a while. I haven't drawn much of anything since my last post about 6 months ago. >_< I'm never going to get anywhere at this rate.
I decided to start with another page of the Loomis head studies... Gah... Loomis makes it look so easy. XD
I think they get a little better each time I try them. I've still got a long way to go though.