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    Sketchbook of decay - Update 14/05/11

    Maybe I will improve.

    Sketchbook of decay - Update 14/05/11

    Sketchbook of decay - Update 14/05/11

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    there is nothing better than amusing self hate!
    i guess its normal to not like your own work, i regularly throw away old sketchbooks or rip out pages.. but there needs to be SOMETHING that gets you going.. only hatehatehate for you?

    on the things you´ve posted.. how about making some life drawings?
    id love to see you drawing things that are around you.. friends, (dead) flowers or buildings. so far the subject range is kinda teenage angst.
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    nice start on the sketch book!
    pld: NEED CRITIQUE! But BEWARE your Eyes might BLEED OUT of YOUR eye SOCKETS <---cause I really suck and haven't done shit pld:
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    I think this stuff looks pretty cool overall. I particularly like the little pirate girl and the SP.

    As far as crits, it kinda looks like you gave up early on some of these pieces, leaving things like the boot on the armored girl, and the bloody-girl's arms unfinished. (This is also something that I do all the time. I almost never finish anything... ) I think all the pieces you posted have a lot of potential, they just need a little more time spent on them.

    The bloody girl is well drawn and rendered, but I don't understand why she is bloody, or what she's doing w/ her arms. I think if you're going to go that dark and disturbing w/ the subject, you should try to match that darkness with the mood of the rest of the painting too; using lighting and texture to evoke emotion. I think some of the best horror art makes the environment be just as horrifying as the subject. Maybe grime it up a bit, and make the lighting more vague so the viewer has to guess what's going on. Don't just go for shock value.

    Overall tho, I think your work is very good. Keep posting!
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    interesting works, your armors shine (no pun!) a lot. some stuff could be polished, but great flavors coming out!
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    Thanks.. I'm so lazy I have so many ideas and once I get them out of my head I forget to finish I have planed to finish everything once I have time.
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    *Yawn* Tattoo design for a friend.


    quick sketch while talking to her about ideas :
    Sketchbook of decay - Update 14/05/11


    Finished design:
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    The armour on Lucretia is damn good, and nobody can ever get enough of disturbing (Read: Awesome) concepts.

    Keep it up`
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    I like your style very much..nice and dark ..keep on going!
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    gah environments

    some attempt at making an environment using only one colour. I just put the rats in for added cute.
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    You have a nice sb, i like your style, too. Lookin forward to see more of your work ...keep postin
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    Liiike it!
    Especially like that pencil drawing with purple elements (and a bone headgearie).
    Moer! (more that is).
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    Way tooo short arms, the elbow should reach somewhere around the bellybutton.
    The hand should reach somwhere at the middle of the thigh.
    Here's a very basic tutorial on face proportions.
    Here
    The breast(s?) should also be a bit more down on the chest.

    Read this to get a hang on body proportions, you should also study some photos.
    But you got a great drawing technique, that's for sure.
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