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    spaztastic :-Thanx and i will look out for the head/body ratio's more often And i hope to keep on improving!


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    ooo I like the enviros very nice!
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    The mountains look good, but the strokes look so rushed. Just slow down, take your time, do your best.

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    Max Challie ;- Took your advies but still could'nt exactly finish it lol. Thanx for the crit and advise, i think it came out allot better.
    spaztastic ;- Thanx spaz.

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    Wow, the mountains are a lot better, though some edges could be sharper. Generally your edges could be sharper, also in the carribean enviro.

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    Nice colors in these studies, man. Very well observed.
    You aren't using the color picker, are you?
    As other have said, your mark making is what could be most improved in these pieces. Scribbly marks like in your mountains have a certain charm to them, especially in fairly quick and loose pieces, but you'll also want to figure out how to say a lot with a little, how to efficiently paint something so that texture and detail is suggested, but you don't paint every little detail. It's tough, though, and I'm not very good at it.

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    Nice sketchbook. I think you are amazing when it comes to painting. Especially for your age. Keep it up man!

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    Me Myself and Me again, its inspiring to see your dedication, and the improvement that results from it. Really digging your creature concepts!
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    that mountains study looks a lot better. And man, I love that octopus, great stuff.

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    Wow thats allot of comments for me! Thanx guys and gals.

    Janos - Thanx dude, from now on i'll use sharper edged brushes on my enviro studies.

    Moai - Thanx matey for the visit. Extra thanx for the advice and no colour picker was used in the making of these enviro's or infact any of my digital peices. I feel likes its cheating.

    paperX - Thanx for the support dude.

    Rushlord - Thanx dude hopefully i'll be as good digitally as i am traditionaly soon.

    the ANGRY filipino - Thanx for the awesome post mate, glad your liking the thread.

    wookiedabo - Thanx!

    Now the replies are done, on to the work which is only one peice at the mo.
    A W.I.P, thats all for the moment.

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    The contrast between the first page and the fifth page is amazing. I love the painting of the beach. The color of the sand looks a little strange (not saturated enough, perhaps?).

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    I am loving the enviros... I wish mine was as good.... I guess I have to get my bum in gear and practice some more of them. So have you been doing your life studies and what not?
    also the newest creature ROCKS!!!!
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    New creature=freaking amazing. Can't wait to see it finished

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    Good book sir, please keep updating

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