@ TheDonut; yes, but more because of more detail.. I was thinking.. The main problem you have with her at the moment is that she doesn't look very tough.. Try making her eyes a bit bigger (wider), and narrowing them a bit vertically so she looks a little daring or something. Right now you can see most of the iris, that gives her a sort of frightened, sad look. You could also try to have her mouth have a little more expression. I'll try a paintover tomorrow if I have time, to show you what I mean Keep a mirror at hand and see which expressions could work. But also, as you need to do a turn around, don't spend tůo much time on the face ^^ it has to look right, but not over detailed, because in the full version you won't see all the details.
Ah well.. Gonna sleep now..