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    Neko Reaper - Crits Please

    Crits + clothing color suggestions would be great. I am not going to change the ear/tail, wing, hair, or eye color. Sora has only three toes per foot; I am not changing that either.

    I might actually redesign the clothes + scythe. I'm still working on both of them, but crits would be great.

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    Perhaps it would be better to change the body's position... so that it's more going with the flow and line of the body (Legs seems like they're pointing ---> while the torso apprears <---) that way it won't seem so awkward. The arm holding the scythe near the top is also somehow awkward... perhaps stretching it out in front or holding it to the side (which ever seems action-oriented)

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    Also, the body reads as a woman but the jaw is fairly large for a woman, looks mannish to me.

    But then, it might just be me.

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    The way you drew his left arm makes it look like it's on backwards.

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    To me the arm seem a bit awkward...
    Im suggesting you either find a new pose for that arm or fix it.

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