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    Angel

    I really liked the way this one turned out
    I know it's not much
    Just looking for any feedback

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    Last edited by dcoley; July 23rd, 2007 at 12:51 AM.
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    Vary your linewidths a bit more. The figure kinda disappears into the fabric and wings, cos those get about the same attention. Maybe you can add some detail to the wings?

    Nice style and cool spartan!

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    Very nice, reminds me of native artwork the way the lines move. To add/focus attention to the warrior, it would be a simple matter of changing the ink lines of the wings and tail/cloak? to a different colour ... a primary colour like red or blue... Just a thought Would add some drama to it as well.

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    This is neat, but there's no real focal point. No point stands out enough to bring the eyes to it, and it makes them work extra-hard, bouncing all over the place. Eyes need somewhere to rest and to be led to where the artist wants them to go.

    Cool, though.

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    Thanks guys...the problem with changing alot of it is that it was all done in ink on paper so I'll have to wait until I get a chance to tamper with it on photoshop
    Atlantis- I know what you mean about the focal point, I'm so used to looking at it that my eye lands somewhere different everytime I look at it
    Thanks again guys...I'll repost an update when I get the chance

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