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The knight is looking WAY better
On that last night it looks like You should have started with bigger brushed and really blocked down some firm foundations to the piece before you moved onto smaller brushes. I might be wrogn since im still new to dig but thats what it looks like to me. Anyway cool sketchbook keep it up man.
Also thanks for all the comments on mine sorry I hadn't got round to postin here before.
Thx for your comment in my sketchbook!
Your last post with the knight is fantastic. Keep it up!
On the portrait, the face is looking good, but the nose seems to be turned up just a tad bit too much.
On the Mecha, its a little difficult to make out the head, but otherwise its really fantastic.
i like the looseness and the palette of this one..
check the Tensai Tokyo Sketch Thread (Sketchbook)
check the Tensai Cityscapes Thread (Finally Finished)
Originally Posted by strych9ineFuck backgrounds, who needs em.
hey bro I have the same pic on my cell too, but I like the pic/animation of the lighter better lol
but ya great work I will echo whats bee said you have improved a lot bro nice job, really digging the black&white thumbnail things
keep it up and btw I have updated
nice work here. especially like the two from the top of this side. nice mood and colours.
working from ref pays of.
Wowza, nice work on the last one! FINISH IT hehe
Good jeebus. Looking through your earlier works as well! You are great!!
Keep 'em comin' for sure!!
Last edited by Mat Kaminski; October 18th, 2007 at 02:01 PM.
Simplify your values a little - define the light and shadow sides more clearly before you worry about subtle values. Also her skin tone in the light side needs more orange - yours is a little undersaturated. (That's a good change of pace though!) Drawing-wise... her abs need to follow the form more - you'rs look like they're attached to a flat surface - they should have an overall round form as well as their rounded muscular shape. (part of that would be solved simplifying your values) Left breast is a little to big on top - check the angle from the tops of the breasts. Also check the angle on her right arm - you it bending in a little too much before the elbow. Lastly, the angle on her necklaces is too horizontal - it should follow the angle of her neck/clavicle more.
I still reccomend drawing girls from life - that way you learn to draw muscle and skin instead of pixels that have been messed with digitally. At any rate, i see improvement on your new digital compared to previous ones. Keep up the hard work!
Hey nice works and studies in here so far, nice guy on the horse with the crazy helmet! hehe
with the portrait I suggest a good dose of life drawing, but maybe more importantly studying a book of anatomy and the planes of the face
try to find those planes on your own face and be familiar with key points/muscles like the muscle that goes around the mouth, ones that go around the eyes, and that one plane from your cheekbone to the mouth, or whatever... hahaha you know what i mean
study and squint at people in real life! look at basic shapes and planes... just try not to be creepy about it ; )
oh yeah and ps: look at how OTHER artists depict the portrait as well!!
You got some pretty nice stuff here, man, Keep it up! I also loved that self portrait of yours.
and thanks for visiting my sketchbook! ^ ^
wow, I really love the old man in the turban, he has a great expression. Also, the belt on that last painting is dying to become a knife of some kind. You could easily turn her into a saucy cavewoman of sorts.