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    Hey all,

    I'm pretty damn new around here so i'll just start by posting my CHOW 77 entry. I'll be keeping this updated as often as i can so please keep giving me all the c&c you feel i need.

    Hope you all enjoy my work and help me improve.

    Cheers all,

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    that looks great!! . took me some time to recognize the person there btw .

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    looks good. two things. one the legs seem kinda long, and his head is too high. his neck should be alil shorter. other than that, i really like the detail work.

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    Pencil1 Cheers for the comment.

    Showdownmetal Yeah completely agree with your crit. Cheers

    So here's a quick sketch to try and speed up my application of values, don't think they're all correct but don't know if i can see em!!!

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    Here's a WIP for a current painting.

    SO COME ON FOLKS HIT ME, i want this finished sooooon

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    I don't really see a whole lot that needs to be done, you might consider making the lines and edges a little sharper. Other than that this looks really good so far.

    Remember, just because you have their attention doesn't mean you have their respect-Dale Gribble (from King of the Hill)
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    The second update to my Demonhunter.

    More crits please

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    Cheers

    Stu

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    Yeah, had to look for a figure on that first one.
    As to the current one, it seems that the lower body
    does not attach to the upper body, the furthest leg in particular.
    Looks like you could cut and move the legs back to line up.
    Other than that, it is coming along nicely.

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    Sellis... nice start... show us ur sketches!!!

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    Here's an update for you all to crit to pieces,

    Coldrum Sketches coming soon

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    All crits Welcome so go for it

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    The trees/foilage in the background of the demon hunter WIP seem a bit faded to me, as if they are translucent. Also I don`t know if you want to make a bit of room for the sky between the cloud to help the composition? (although that`s preference I think)

    With the towers, more detail in the extreme foreground mabye?

    Really nice work though, I`m jealous.

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    Wow! love your work. inspiration blast!

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    I'd try making that guy's knee more prominent, The silhouette confused me around the leg area, I'd just raise it up maybe 10 degrees or less- because it runs parallel with the sword which throws the eye right now, but a small change to that will increase the effectiveness alot! =)

    awesome stuff too, keep posting please!!

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