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Thread: Sellis' sketchbook!
July 15th, 2007 #1
I'm pretty damn new around here so i'll just start by posting my CHOW 77 entry. I'll be keeping this updated as often as i can so please keep giving me all the c&c you feel i need.
Hope you all enjoy my work and help me improve.
Last edited by Sellis; March 29th, 2008 at 02:32 PM.
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July 15th, 2007 #3
looks good. two things. one the legs seem kinda long, and his head is too high. his neck should be alil shorter. other than that, i really like the detail work.
July 17th, 2007 #4
Pencil1 Cheers for the comment.
Showdownmetal Yeah completely agree with your crit. Cheers
So here's a quick sketch to try and speed up my application of values, don't think they're all correct but don't know if i can see em!!!
Last edited by Sellis; November 27th, 2007 at 11:09 AM.
July 18th, 2007 #5
July 18th, 2007 #6
I don't really see a whole lot that needs to be done, you might consider making the lines and edges a little sharper. Other than that this looks really good so far.
July 20th, 2007 #7
July 20th, 2007 #8
Yeah, had to look for a figure on that first one.
As to the current one, it seems that the lower body
does not attach to the upper body, the furthest leg in particular.
Looks like you could cut and move the legs back to line up.
Other than that, it is coming along nicely.
August 13th, 2007 #9Antipodean
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Sellis... nice start... show us ur sketches!!!
August 13th, 2007 #10
August 13th, 2007 #11
The trees/foilage in the background of the demon hunter WIP seem a bit faded to me, as if they are translucent. Also I don`t know if you want to make a bit of room for the sky between the cloud to help the composition? (although that`s preference I think)
With the towers, more detail in the extreme foreground mabye?
Really nice work though, I`m jealous.
August 13th, 2007 #12CA newbie
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Wow! love your work. inspiration blast!
August 15th, 2007 #13
I'd try making that guy's knee more prominent, The silhouette confused me around the leg area, I'd just raise it up maybe 10 degrees or less- because it runs parallel with the sword which throws the eye right now, but a small change to that will increase the effectiveness alot! =)
awesome stuff too, keep posting please!!