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    Merry meet! I am new to CA and this is my first post. I have had an interest in art since I was very young, but have only recently been getting back into it. I come to this website completely humble and eager for critique, especially because no one else will do me the favor!

    This is a recent sketch, which is actually an underdrawing where I got carried away doing the anatomy. So, before adding the clothes, I saved the picture because I liked it. It was done from my head with no references, so critique away! I called this stage of it "Bare Laughter."
    First Post! Critiques Desired^^

    This is "Pigtails Sketch" done from a model a few months ago:
    First Post! Critiques Desired^^

    And this is "Nyah-Chan" done in all pencil with a background in PhotoShop, no references:
    First Post! Critiques Desired^^

    My best media is mech. pencil, and I do need to start working on backgrounds Please feel free to offer critique, advice, books, anything. Don't hold back! (Just don't be too mean, either )
    Thank you for your time!

    Last edited by Honey Hecatomb; December 14th, 2009 at 04:44 AM.
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    On the first drawing her knee, hip bone, and thigh all seem to blend into one confusing limb, that and the big toe is on the wrong side of the foot : ). These are coming along very nicely though, i like the kitty one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rummity View Post
    On the first drawing her knee, hip bone, and thigh all seem to blend into one confusing limb, that and the big toe is on the wrong side of the foot : ). These are coming along very nicely though, i like the kitty one.
    Ack, how did that big toe get by me? Foreshortening the limb was a first try; I will try to make it better next time.
    Thank you for your comment!

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