Firstly I wanna say I definitally dig your illustrations. You can render and your not boring, which i believe is very hard to find. *caution your a diamond in some rough*
You asked for crits on that naked chick in the meadow? I have some, but feel free to disregard them if needed.
i think you need to place something in the back ground that she is looking at,(you probably already had this as a piece of the BG sticks out) i think it should be a warmer colour for a play on tempature, but its your piece. ALso i know you lost her clothes, but i would put a nice amount of detail within the portion that is on her shoulder blades and up, because although our eyes are drawn there without detail for our eyes to rest on we drift visually
anywhoo man, your a great artist and its gonna be fun to watch you grow.
EDIT- you have a fear of feet, fix it and youll own figures
atlantik- heh heh, actually i think i am going to keep it a simple nude, the figure is done well enough and i don't really have a strong direction for the clothing. also yea i think i'll work more on the hair
hp- haha yea that type would definitely fit better, so thanks for the refs!
enthombed- cool thanks for stopping by glad you like that one, it took a little bit more work than most of my stuff on here, still tetering on whether it was worth it or not but i was really into it when painting it!
frog and *BAM*- I wasn't even gonna post it, but i'm glad i did now cause the crits have inspired me to finish it up.
Genome- thanks for the kind words! and great crit, i agree with everything said and will keep it in mind
heres another quicky, hope you like it, i've been trying not to get caught up in over rendering and such.
new one is looking neat, i look forward to seeing all its details brought out because it generates great eye moement right now...so keep going on it.
I think it would be pretty impactful if his hand/weapon were more outstretched towards us and larger - no idea if you're even willing to rework it that much but it would make a neat composition imo.
The nude figure in the field...amazing choice to shift the shaded to brightly lit skin in the way you did...pushing reality even a bit brings it to life, and the warm really contrasts with the greens and greys. The sky looks too painted here and there compared to the rest, give it a little more attention? later!
Mr.Delicious- by the time i'm 80 I will most definitely have drawn that many bums and i shall collage them together to create the grandest buttox mural of them all, the great crack in the sky shall split and a blinding beam of light will spotlight the mural lifting it into the heavens where it will become a god.
Jakers- cool thanks for the crits, I hadn't even thought about adjusting the sky.
heres an update for the field girl, still not finish but it should be very soon.
heres a sketch i'm working on, still needs a lot of work but hopefully I'll be able to get it to a finished state! I never really did much black and white work but i've been having a lot of fun with them lately.