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    Follow the darkness...

    Hi Folks.

    I'm new to this place. This work took a few hours to produce... Just wondering if i could get some feedback.

    Thanks ^^

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    I really, really like this. Maybe some more distortion on the figures' shadows to show grass and terrain, but otherwise awesome.

    and, Welcome to Conceptart.org!

    Look, you know what I mean. You take a bunch of people who don’t seem any different from you or me, but when you add them all together you get this sort of huge raving maniac with national borders and an anthem.
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    The horse seems kinda fat and way too big for the guy. Prolly the saddle thing causing that.

    Lovely textures.

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    beautifull....simple but really effective...the rocks are awsome. I agree with the previous crits...also the way the sun/eclipse dealio fades into the left of the pic is nice, but Id like to see it either go the same way on the right....or fade out with the ink splatter rather than the "m" shapes (if that makes sense) looking forward to more

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    Thanks for the comments Really appreciated.
    I agree with the crits, although the guys legs are supposed to be slightly cut off as hes over the hill leading his horse away.

    I think i'll try to adjust these few things and maybe re-post
    Thanks again ^^

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    Worked on the things that were standing out.
    I agree that the 'm' shapes on the glare were a little un-easy on the eye so i have smoothed that out and adjusted the figure and the horse.

    Let me know what you think
    Thanks and best wishes

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    How did you get that beautiful texture? You absolutely must share... if you want to.

    Thumbs up on the texture, bro.

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    Nice stuff.. though your shadows look like reflections. they shoud be very stretched

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