I'm pretty sure you get an image beside your post by putting one of the images from your first post in that white box that says 'Attached Thumbnail', or something like that.
Nice images, but the thing that really bothers me is the guy with the sword on the front cover. It looks like you need to spend more time on that. Also, some of the pages have so many text bubbles all in the same place, where I'm just thinking, "Where does this start and where does it end?" An example of what I'm talking about would be the pages with the guy at the bottom who's yelling, "Alistair!" I don't really know how to fix this problem, because I don't make and never have made comics, but what I would suggest that you do is space out the bubbles more and make it more obvious about who says what. Maybe make one page where there is too much text into two seperate pages.
That's all I know about comics, so you should probably ask someone who's better acquainted with them.
Last edited by Leftyy; July 5th, 2007 at 12:38 PM.
"Yes, Ms. Flameel?"
"Multiply 47 times 83."
"Multiplication, it's math education! Isn't this swell? Oh, let's give multiplication a standing ovation...
so buy a calculator, study this stuff later!"
-Animaniacs (only a few good quotes from that song. Search "The Multiplication Song - Animaniacs" on YouTube
for this video and any other Animaniacs classic!)