Last edited by wiggum; April 5th, 2008 at 09:34 PM. Reason: wanted to change thumbnail
hi whats the story about firstly. the images are good for getti g a general
idea of the charcters but they need a little work.
A3PORTE, I guess I should have gone into a little more detail about the story, so I'll lay it out in the most general of terms:
The angel you see above in named Reya, she did something to piss of God and got booted out of heaven ending up in Detroit, MI of all places. After recovering from her wounds, Reya finds herself trapped in human form with no memory of anything that had happened. Eventually she befriends a local stripper (this sounds stupid, but it makes sense in the script), and they become friends. Things seem to be going good for Reya until her angelic past attracts some unwanted attention.
If you, or anyone else is interested in the story send me a personal message and I will email you a copy of the story.
Ace. I really like both of them. The first one needs the line quality of the second. Probably fuck the colours off too. Just do the lines. Your style's really quirky and interesting.
Didn't like the colors? I thought they were pretty good, but I guess everyone has there own opinion. Anyways, this is the picture of Reya loosing her wings.
These are a few pictures of the main villian in the story, his name is Hamon (a demon). These are pretty quick pictures, and I have not yet been able to decide whether or not I should keep the horns on him or not.
Here are a few quick pics of the two main characters in clothing
I started drawing this a couple days ago, normally I can churn out a drawing in an hour or so, but it took me such a long time just to get the basic shape of the body right, I figured that I should just try and finish it. This depicts the moment right after Reya gets her wings torn off, and right before she is cast down to earth. I tried a different style with this, let me know what you guys think. (I know that this scan isn't of the highest quality, my scanner is pretty small and I don't have access to a larger one.)
I started working on some actual story drawings today, they are taking a lot longer than I thought they would, so here is an old drawing of Jackie I did a while ago.
Hey there, this looks like a good beginning to a sketchbook here, a question though. There is a drastic improvement in the quality between the first three pics and the rest of the lot, how do you account for that?
Strangely, with all the nudity around I enjoyed the picture of the demon (4th from the top) most. I suppose it was all the shading, it made it look more dynamic. Same with the second to last one (my second favorite of the bunch) of the angel who lost her wings.
Anyhow keep going, if you can make another progression jump like the first one you'd be doing pretty good.
I think the problem with pen&ink is that there is no Ctrl+z command.
writers and artists have a lot in common -- we both draw from life, we both paint pictures, and we'll both spend to many sleepless nights on our work.
My (new) sketchbook: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=100982
My (old) Sketchbook:http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=88773
Gunther409-The difference in style between the images is simply a result of me trying to find a style for a comic book project I'm working on. I'm glad you liked the angel without wings because that is the way I was planning on going in the future. Thanks for the comment
This is my first story picture, it took forever to draw and it was too big for my scanner so I took a digital picture of it, I tried to clean it up in photoshop but I'm not that good with it yet. I'm sorry if it looks too blurry.
I'm still working on some new story sketches, they should be ready for posting in a little while. In the mean time I'll post a pictures of some of the other characters. One is an old mortician, and the other is a psycho murderer