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    Gently!

    This is an image that came to mind when I was thinking of replacing the home page image of my website. I thought it was simple and striking and describes the dark fantasy art I would like to do more of. Now that It's close to finished I'm not too sure and I feel like I've seen before it before just not sure where. Odd. What do you guys think I can do to make it more effective?

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    cool man.
    i think you should crop in from the right so that the arms aren't so equal in size.
    and the left side of the word bubble makes a tangent with the left side of the comp.

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    That is a good idea.

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    I agree about the arms, either crop it closer to avoid that repeated shape or make the arm come in at a different angle. Interesting colors and textures :]

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    I'd make it so that the eyeballs are staring at the viewer. It sort of looks like thats what you're trying to do now, but its a little hard to make out.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Slash View Post
    I'd make it so that the eyeballs are staring at the viewer. It sort of looks like thats what you're trying to do now, but its a little hard to make out.
    Didn't even notice that until you pointed that out also, for a while I thought it was the gruesome head and neck of some sort of monster, as opposed to a skull held up by monstrous hands. So, I guess there should be a bit of clarity added to both those areas, (I'd suggest more reflected light on the top hand) but damn it's looking good

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