Wow. You've gotten a few snarky comments here.
I think this is a great question. I've actually been trying to see if I could find online the pages from "The Artist's Complete Guide to Facial...
Looking forward to it!
Well, I could be wrong, but the way you colour the hair doesn't look flat, so that makes the rest of the picture look odd by being flat.
Why are the hooks closest to us, which are holding onto the screen, shorter?