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    His visor seems to be extending a bit far to our...

    His visor seems to be extending a bit far to our right if Robo's facing a bit to our left. His back forearm also tends to be leaning foward a bit when he strikes that pose, and his hand is usually in...
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    I'm liking the new character, especially the...

    I'm liking the new character, especially the pose. I'd have to agree with Lhune's point about simplicity, and though you've improved I still find the forearm area a little confusing to look at. Maybe...
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    I don't know what your process is, but I agree...

    I don't know what your process is, but I agree with Wooblood that construction will greatly help. The silhouette of her abdomen looks strange to me, but I can't really tell because it's just an...
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    As well as what Pinkas said, it may help to try...

    As well as what Pinkas said, it may help to try different angles or compositions. Sticking the eye right in the middle of the frame makes it hard to appreciate anything else in the picture. A...
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    This has improved! I think the head's still...

    This has improved! I think the head's still slightly too large, though, or that the torso is too short. It's generally around 4 heads from top of head to crotch area, but here it's closer to 3 heads....
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    This is not bad. The anatomy problems are there,...

    This is not bad. The anatomy problems are there, though; two things that jump out at me right away are that her left calf is thicker than her thigh and her right foot is a little short. The whole...
  7. Thread: boring bot

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    The head looks like it could naturally extend out...

    The head looks like it could naturally extend out of its little recess there and swivel around. Might not be too much of a stretch for it to place it in there to be more compact or protected when it...
  8. Thread: Voltaire

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    Point taken. Stuck to muscles for now, but will...

    Point taken. Stuck to muscles for now, but will keep volume in mind.

    Sort of split between leaving the muscles as-is, or covering them. I apologize for the cover pieces not fitting in with the...
  9. Thread: Voltaire

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    Thanks for the advice, though I would rather keep...

    Thanks for the advice, though I would rather keep the human silhouette -- I think it's justifiable given the muscles. I was going to go for a more tube-muscle look to begin with, drawing from the...
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    The grays are very muted. Don't be afraid to push...

    The grays are very muted. Don't be afraid to push your blacks and whites further, especially since there's a big light right there.

    But besides that, I think some more attention to detail and...
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    Changes are generally an improvement, though the...

    Changes are generally an improvement, though the more pronounced shoulderpads and collar made him look more dynamic; the changes make him look more practical, but less heroic.
    Low crotch problem is...
  12. Thread: Voltaire

    by Tangleworm
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    Voltaire

    Technically the same robot that I posted a while ago, just renamed with the moniker of a famous French philosopher.

    Hi guys, I guess it's been a while since I've posted here. I've mostly been...
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    Skin as a lot of subtle variations in its tone;...

    Skin as a lot of subtle variations in its tone; you're kind of jumping between wildly saturated hues, like on the sternocleidomastoid, and completely flat tan. The color will also be largely affected...
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    The right of her collar looks to be connected in...

    The right of her collar looks to be connected in a sort of weird way, overlapping with her neck. The lines running down the vest are also not accounting for the forms; you've drawn them straight...
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    Cool idea, but as Quigleyer said, I'm having a...

    Cool idea, but as Quigleyer said, I'm having a bit of trouble picturing the movement. Her lower body seems to be pushing her to the side, but her upper body is straight up and down. Her left arm...
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    I'm getting a YEAH BEST BUDS feel from the latest...

    I'm getting a YEAH BEST BUDS feel from the latest update, which is totally rad cool bro but I think a more controlling or ambiguous look would be nice. You say you wanted them merged at the arm;...
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    Interesting. That left ankle of hers looks like...

    Interesting. That left ankle of hers looks like it's in a really uncomfortable position, though, and her right hand looks to be somewhat too large. I'll wait until I see the actual render, but at the...
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    I like this one better, but it still doesn't look...

    I like this one better, but it still doesn't look like it would fit a "scout" role. It's mainly the weapon; not only would it be extremely hefty and more fit for a heavy assault trooper, I can't...
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    I like the style of it. I don't think the nose is...

    I like the style of it. I don't think the nose is too large at all.
    Still, the face looks just a little bit long if you're going for a realistic look, specifically everything between her eyes and...
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    The mask fits in more when in color. Still, would...

    The mask fits in more when in color. Still, would be uncomfortable to wear stone on one's head, I'd imagine. Especially since it'd be pressing up against his two sets of hidden eyes. How's it...
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    The demon's mask looks like it's of a different...

    The demon's mask looks like it's of a different style or construction than the rest of him, almost looking fabricated or machined out of metal. This might change with the colors put in, but at the...
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    Though it might have been deliberate, I found...

    Though it might have been deliberate, I found this to be a large departure from the style you've established for the world. Interesting given the backstory, but things like the midriff-baring top and...
  23. Thread: Fem_portret

    by Tangleworm
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    Forgive me if this has been answered, but I'm...

    Forgive me if this has been answered, but I'm confused as to the character itself. Your sketch shows an alien character, but the rendered version looks as if it's intended to be human. Nonetheless,...
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    I'm having trouble reading the "tree" aspect of...

    I'm having trouble reading the "tree" aspect of his character. The branches are nice, but look a little spindly and frail on the 3D model; a totally overblown, heavily exaggerated style would fit...
  25. Thread: Pistol WIPs

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    Ditto on the line issue. Guns are rather tightly...

    Ditto on the line issue. Guns are rather tightly made pieces of equipment, and a more precise way of drawing the lines would be befitting of them.

    That aside, the grip looks a bit too short. The...
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