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    I agree with Mr.D about the weightless stuff (I...

    I agree with Mr.D about the weightless stuff (I simply didn't read the others carefully, I'm focusing on the figure).

    The girl has a too big head with many anatomy flaws. A skull study wouldn't be...
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    Heady

    Hello

    Over all like the work, reminds me of Luis Royo's work. But I imagine you're looking for critical advise.
    Tree to the left, the bright highlighting stokes could use a bit of smoothing. ...
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    by wooblood
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    Hey Michael. Some nice, interesting things going...

    Hey Michael. Some nice, interesting things going on in this so far.
    I'm not really getting the overall concept of this though. Is this a repair on a unit? Is it a new build? Or is 'she' getting...
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    Even though I assume they are robotic, the...

    Even though I assume they are robotic, the figures in the background need a bit of anatomical correction, particularly their shoulders and breasts... perhaps double check the alignment of the...
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    Yeah, it would help to know which colors you wish...

    Yeah, it would help to know which colors you wish to keep. Right now the shirt and pants match the background too closely, and only the skin areas have any real color. I would just assume that you...
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    I agree. Spreading some of the color from the...

    I agree. Spreading some of the color from the figure into the background like red or yellow might be worth experimenting with. Just enough to tie them together. Other than that, I might only suggest...
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    Nah, previous one with the female against the...

    Nah, previous one with the female against the glass was much better. With the hand shooting out fro mthe ground made it all the more effective and i agree with VawnOTheDawn, you need to get rid of...
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    I like this new one, but I feel it can benefit...

    I like this new one, but I feel it can benefit from leaving the shadow off entirely. I feel like this piece wants to be all about this woman but the shadow is distracting me from her.
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    2 is pretty good. It's original and tells the...

    2 is pretty good. It's original and tells the scene in a different light. 3 is also good, but is quite a well known way of portraying front cover situations. I also like 9, as the angles used in...
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    No. 10. Make it vertical. Make the woman bigger....

    No. 10.
    Make it vertical. Make the woman bigger. Don't decapitate the foreground figure (cropping directly at a joint is almost always awkward; crop higher or lower).
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    I vote number 9

    I vote number 9
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    danke. numbers 10,9 5 and 7 have the most...

    danke.

    numbers 10,9 5 and 7 have the most potential and are most interesting in my opinion :)


    the details of these are okay for what they are...i think youll have to nail a few and throw some...
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    Less [perfectly] form fitting. We wouldn't be...

    Less [perfectly] form fitting. We wouldn't be able to make out her breasts/ribcage, etc unless her costume was made out of thin latex or plastic wrap (or painted on).
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    Wow, you're all about changing things up, huh? ...

    Wow, you're all about changing things up, huh? So that costume is actually just painted onto her body? :P Kidding aside, I would really tone down that nude body aspect unless you're just trying to...
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    My opinion to make her look more commanding, by...

    My opinion to make her look more commanding, by putting the other feet on the corpse with slightly spreaded legs. Also the perspective could be a little more upviewing, sizing up her feet and sizing...
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    Hmm, pretty intriguing, but I'm not really...

    Hmm, pretty intriguing, but I'm not really getting the concept. She just shot the guy and he fell back onto a railing (pretty awkwardly), but why would she come and rest her foot on the dead guy all...
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    Love the new face version! The character...

    Love the new face version! The character definitely comes across a lot better :) The tips of her hair look too clumpy at the moment.. unless her hair is wet, I would expect to see a lot more...
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    As I'm sure you've noticed, you have vastly...

    As I'm sure you've noticed, you have vastly improved the piece with this recent iteration- good work :)

    Now, for nit picking : The lighting on her left breast (our right) could be improved. It...
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    I meant keep just the sky, the sky structure and...

    I meant keep just the sky, the sky structure and the background objects are kind of fighting for attention and I don't think they add anything to the picture.
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    Nice. I would say the lighter shadows on the...

    Nice.

    I would say the lighter shadows on the cloak are causing it to disunify with the girl. Also, get some ref on the lighting on the girls face. Just using the airbrush tool in photoshop...
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    I suggest unless you want to do a decent...

    I suggest unless you want to do a decent background, keep it clean as it was 2 versions above. It really feels forced and rushed as it is. Make the cloak "fading away", too, to get some depth. About...
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    Her lips are facing us, while her face is looking...

    Her lips are facing us, while her face is looking off to the right.
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    She looks a bit squished top to bottom. I would...

    She looks a bit squished top to bottom. I would try stretching the whole image vertically by about 10% and then, since her head becomes kinda big, shrinking the head by about 5% or so. Looks like...
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    Well, what I meant was something closer to this:...

    Well, what I meant was something closer to this:

    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/10036065/alita_PO.jpg

    Shoulders should be moved down to allow the neck a steeper slope.
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    Just throwing another approach to...

    Just throwing another approach to western-comic-style-instead-of-manga Alita based on your refs in there. Since that looks like what it is you're going for. Hope it helps!
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