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The mouth is a different shape than it was in the sketch. I liked the sketch mouth better.
For the cape, the bottom of it looks nice but the rest of it still looks like paper. You used a brighter...
It doesn't really matter. It's a quick sketch, obviously I take more time and make it less smudgy if it's a big thing.
Yes, the eye is normal. The quality is perhaps diminished by my scanner. My scanner sucks. It needs to die.
Stop bending that chin up.
I thought I'd do a comparison.
I'm left handed, but I am 50% right-brained, 50% left-brained. It's just the way I am, I've taken many tests for it. I draw with the mouse with my right hand, but normally I draw with my left hand. I...
I have some things to say that were not pointed out by Sinaz and Elwell.
I am fifteen years old, quite a bit younger than you are. This does give me an insight into anime, however, as most of my...
I just noticed that the right hand looks really flat because the shading on it is wrong. I don't have time to find you a reference now, but you can do that by yourself.
Wouldn't the emo girl look more... emo with black hair and darker lipstick? Right now she looks fairly normal.
Why did you make two topics for two drawings? They're right beside each other.
Your sketch was a lot better in terms of the face (showing the eyes and the mouth shape). The yellow cape needs a lot of work. It's very messy and confusing. Folds on the bottom of clothes don't work...
About the chin...
And then I noticed that the hairline was a little low and incorrectly angled.
Hmm, nice username. :\
I was saying that the boobs are too big. I mean... come on. The women are fairly well drawn, but since when are boobs that round? It's not like every woman has double D...
*ahem* Light saber *ahem*
Anyway, yeah, it's way too simple. You need more shading and highlights. The face needs A LOT of shading.
Those are some really pretty colours. Also, I'm impressed that I can really feel the sand in my eyes. That's very well done. It's pretty.
I think it's fairly lame that your gallery and sketchbook on that web site only have pictures of naked girls (with extremely unrealistic bodies at that).
You should draw something else.
Haha, wow, I love the concept.
*is a girl*
That's an awesome concept. I love it. That's all I can say about this.
The eyes are too close together and too wide. His lips are too close to the side of the head and also, they're purple which makes him look very, very, very girly.
The collarbone... bones are too...
The left eye looks like it's coming forward too much. The head shape at the top needs to have a line for the forehead. The hair looks wrong. I kind of fixed it in Paint.
MWAHAHAHA, :D I love this.
Oh, thank God.
It's pretty nice. I somehow don't think the shading on the faces looks natural. Mostly the foreheads. I think the change from dark to light is too fast.
Oh, and, hurrah for another picture of 90%...
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Look at the middle guy's abs (and not just for fun either :D... I'm a girl).
I think that the arm muscles on the first picture could be a little better but other than that, it's fairly cool.
The hawk and backgrounds are nice. The style has a very First Nations vide to it.
I know, I know.
It was just a really quick sketch. I'm normally neat.
The widescreen-ness of it is really annoying.