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This work is nicer than a lot of work that people do, including mine
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Torney I never know you draw comics. They are interesting to look at though
I would prefer his legs to be stronger, it looks like as if he sits so much that he forgot to use his legs
The 2nd one is more refined and thus better. Keep up with it
I looked at the way you coloured the clothes - you did a better job than me
I'll wait for more opinion, and see how it goes. Thanks anyways. :)
To be honest, the part I'm not happy about is the greyish part. The main colours (probably only) here are red yellow and blue. I...
I don't think I can crit this piece yet, but I think it's an awesome piece in both lighting and emotion. What does that sign over there mean? It interest me but the word "m" is hidden. Mind putting...
I do have one part that I'm not happy about, but overall I'm happy with it.
Don't stress it if you can't think of any crit. You can always leave a comment :)
your mouse is so cute :D
The most basic of all is doing it like a square, ie draw a # then you get 9 frames to draw. Or you can combine 4 squares depending how you want the reader to go through the comic.
The facial expression looks more like a part of a comic instead of an artistic piece. In fact the whole feeling of the drawing. I guess it's not the expression that has a big problem depending where...
alot of stuff going wrong here....
If a head is a circle, draw a line that crosses the centre of the circle. That's where the eyes should be. You drew the eyes too high above that line, which is a...
I personally will darkon the trees a little and brighten the figures *runs away*
but it's an awesome piece no doubt
no problem :)
If I think of more stuff I'll post it here
First scan - Oh don't just scribble for the sea part, it will be better if you find some photos of the sea and get its light/dark part right instead. Hm the lighting seem to be all wrong. To fix...
Hands is always the hardest part to draw, especially if it's without reference, I'm basically half dead at it.
I forgot about your rumi beforehand.
I never really use the gradiet tool in the...
what's wrong with the rumi? x_x
oh torney those cubes make me think about those little moving dice in the background lol
the trees are much nicer now, less statue-ize in a way
if it's a sunny day the shadows are more crips, otherwise it's not. In the drawing you suggest it's a sunny day, but the shadows are blurry
Head is okay
Left leg is longer than the right leg
The basketball appears to be even smaller than a soccer ball
His right arm is off, shift it a little bit right.
Oh I'm sorry I mixed up the words. I mean that the shadow should be as obvious as the lines, like pure black clothes and dark grey shadows without any gradient at all
I don't understand, mind explaining it a bit? :)
(oh refereing to the double post XD)
oh damn I forget about that flipping thingy too >_>