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I don't understand your thought process op.
Why should people fund you? what makes you so different from all the other artists who post their hard work on their sketchbook threads regularly?
Your coloring/painting skill need some work, in my humble opinion.
It's very airbrushy at places and the lighting doesn't seem to follow the shape of the objects, for example in the last girls...
Kuroro, Thank you! I will keep that in mind :B
-CA-Disciple, Thank you! hm I see, I will try to do more cartooning then
ahhh I would say I'm weakest at perspective and composition. Planning big...
I think you should work more on the Fundamentals of art.
Work on form and light, what I notice is your paintings are quite flat, they dont look like objects in space.
Some examples, the way you...
Lots of hardwork in your sketchbook, that's great!
Maybe pay more attention to the proportion of your studies. Some figures look very enlongated, specially the legs.
A small suggestion,...
Im really diggin the environments. The brushstrokes are really good O: Specially that last landscape, even though you say its unfinished.
The photostudies and pencil sketches are looking good as...
Thank you Black Spot, for banning.
I'm surprised they lasted so long lol , I mean...Goddamn!
I think the thread was just double posted by mistake the first time.
Thank you Misty Feather :blah:
more sketchiness this time :/
The figure studies are looking great!
lots of 3dimensionality.
Keep going! you are improving a lot.
I suggest you work on the Fundamentals of art.
Things like form, and anatomy seem to be the biggest issues.
For example, in the poison ivy image, her head is too big, the torso and legs...
You could work more on your form. At the moment the image feels very flat since the shadows are very light, and there are no cast shadows.
For the hair is better to not render every single...
Thefinal imagefor the environment of the week
eastern version of a knight riding an...
I think a longer cape would look better.
But that is not why your figure looks stiff.
It has to do with gesture of the pose.
In general it would be good if you worked more on the structure of the...
If that's the case, you may want to avoid Tumblr as well haha :blah:
Thank you Misty Feather !
I just try to practice what I learn from studies in imagination paintings, I want to improve my skill so I think I should keep pushing as much as I can (*´ｪ｀*)
I think it would be best to get reference for the clothing, a picture of someone wearing a similar outfit and doing a similar pose, or you could wear a blazer and study the folds in the mirror as you...
Hey!I think you have a good gesture.
The thing that jumps at me is the folds. It looks a bit strange the way the cloth wraps around the joints of the character.
what a strange topic Cx
I've never read that book so I read the wikipedia entry, where it describes the Ministry as a building with no Windows, but whose interior lights are always on..? So even...
Nice to see you still fighting
Never give up, never surrender Cx
I think it would help you to construct your paintings from basic shapes, for example in your dragon painting, start...
Thank you Misty Feather
more practices, gotta keep practicing *_*
from the World Cup
Its true. You can critique anything that you stumble upon on Deviantart, just dont feel outraged when some people dont take your unsolicited advice .
Having said that I do enjoy that site. Its...
yeah, I don't give critique nor suggestions on deviantart unless the artist specifically asks for it. There are a lot of people over there who only draw for fun, and because they like to get favs,...