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You could, if you wanted detail feedback on what works and doesn;t, try out a bunch of versions on a single piece of paper and scan them all together. With something like that posted, you would be...
These are fun.
The context of a story isn't apparent here, but the way the somewhat disconnected images (more in the first) seem connected here reminds me of Mike Mignola.