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I think your drawings show good design intent but for the most part don't communicate it very well. I think it has to do with having good foundational skills which are hopefully what you'll be...
I think the main thing that you could work on are your figures. Doing figure drawing would be good, also doing some anatomy studies would also help.
Know this thread is kind of old but... I think that something you could improve is giving your surfaces different textures, a lot of the objects have a sort of smooth indistinct texture and soft...
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