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    It's good, but like said previously, the...

    It's good, but like said previously, the composition needs work. I think some of the focal points are too close to the edge, and the viewer isn't really being led anywhere. I think you should tone...
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    I'm not really feeling like I'm being led into...

    I'm not really feeling like I'm being led into the piece. I love the look and all the colours, but I feel that the arch in the foreground kind of stops you dead in your tracks. I think that if the...
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    Yeah the composition doesn't do much to direct...

    Yeah the composition doesn't do much to direct you towards the character.

    Doing something like this makes it much stronger.

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    Where is your primary light source? Did you...

    Where is your primary light source?

    Did you draw a perspective plot for this?
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    Here's a few things I picked up on. I'm not good...

    Here's a few things I picked up on. I'm not good with backgrounds so I didn't really give you much input in that area.
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    My two cents here, I think the rays of light that...

    My two cents here, I think the rays of light that you added really detracts from the spooky, foreboding atmosphere you had before. Before I was thinking maybe it was at nighttime, or in the gloom of...
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    Very saucy Jon - like it. It's going to be a...

    Very saucy Jon - like it. It's going to be a strong piece for sure classic hammer horror all the way man. Just really simple emotive narrative. Nobody wants to see a pretty girl get it so it...
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    Hello mate! As NapolÚon Bonaparte used to say:...

    Hello mate!
    As NapolÚon Bonaparte used to say: a picture speaks a thousand words so I've made a paintover but you get the thousand words too:
    -changing the framing adds to the drama IMO
    -I've...
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    Looks like you foreshortened his face, without...

    Looks like you foreshortened his face, without actually compensating for the fact that we will see the bottom of his lower jaw, nose, brows...
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    I think this would benefit a lot by separating...

    I think this would benefit a lot by separating the foreground mid ground and background by value. Every part of this image is in a similar value range and it makes things like that cliff to the right...
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    1. Needs etter perspective. 2. Needs better...

    1. Needs etter perspective.
    2. Needs better lighting.
    3. Needs better anatomy.
    4. Needs less mushy airbrush.

    Might also check if a different framing would work better.
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    Hey Gragg. Immediately the guy's face stands out...

    Hey Gragg. Immediately the guy's face stands out to me. It's a bit skewed, the green lighting on the eyes isn't really quite working and really the character's focus seems just slightly off. I'd...
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    Hello dude, To start off I love your composition...

    Hello dude,
    To start off I love your composition and the colours you have used in the piece.My crits would be.
    - You have too many small strokes/details try to simplify them so that the forms are...
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    I second everything written below and add one...

    I second everything written below and add one minor thing:

    I wonder if there might be a little orange reflected light on the bottom of the raised arm. Also, if the dragon is swopping in from the...
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    Woo, awesome details and I love how you're...

    Woo, awesome details and I love how you're handling the lighting. Very cool. I have a few suggestions...

    His hands aren't the same size, the hand on the staff is too small and the other hand is...
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    I like the composition but the lighting/color on...

    I like the composition but the lighting/color on the dude vs the dragon snake just behind him isn't working. They're sort of blurring into each other, especially his left arm.

    Also - where's the...
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    Hmmm no one is saying anything? Oh well......

    Hmmm no one is saying anything? Oh well... Interesting way of working. Can I suggest a larger brush to block out your lighting rather than small strokes? This helps you keep values consistent across...
  18. Thread: Fire Mage WIP

    by Toriknew
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    Wow, Gragg, really? It's true that more...

    Wow, Gragg, really? It's true that more experienced artists know more about the areas they talk about, but it's important to respect the opinions and the advice from anyone, regardless of whether...
  19. Thread: Ice Mage Wip

    by Maggietoh
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    the High contrast of where the hair hits the neck...

    the High contrast of where the hair hits the neck is extreme. I would lighten it up. Also the pose looks very symmetrical like you mirrored her arms. I like that you have one leg bent more and coming...
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    by Giacomo
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    1. Go back to your "Fire Mage" thread. 2. Copy...

    1. Go back to your "Fire Mage" thread.
    2. Copy all the comments people made on that thread and paste them here, because everything said about your "Fire Mage" picture is equally applicable to this...
  21. Thread: Fire Mage WIP

    by TNiznet
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    Hi Gragg, I did a quick paint over which I...

    Hi Gragg, I did a quick paint over which I believed to be a key problem. Your figure has a lot of male qualities, ranging from the placement of the bellybutton to the unbalanced upper torso in...
  22. Thread: Fire Mage WIP

    by Lulie
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    I liked the muscular look of before! It is more...

    I liked the muscular look of before! It is more realistic, but it still has some of the problems I was trying to get at. You've made the hips starting at the leg wide, but you haven't made the hip...
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    Gragg totally understand where youre coming from...

    Gragg totally understand where youre coming from bud, but what I will say is i noticed after doing studies of landscapes and cars and stuff, i can somehow create them out of my head a lot easier than...
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    by Giacomo
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    If you ARE spending five hours a day, you're...

    If you ARE spending five hours a day, you're working on the wrong stuff. Don't worry about rendering or "finish" for the moment. Sign up for a figure-drawing class immediately...on the days when...
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    by Giacomo
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    If you want to be a professional artist (or at...

    If you want to be a professional artist (or at least one working in a realistic style) you need to draw from observation until the process of drawing becomes absolutely second nature. Work from...
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