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    SketchBook: I'm leaning more towards B) as well, mainly...

    I'm leaning more towards B) as well, mainly because of the lighting. Although, it would be interesting to see A) lit with ambient light from up-top (might not make sense since the sky's cloudy)!
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    SketchBook: Hey Pin, a lot of great updates in the SB. I...

    Hey Pin, a lot of great updates in the SB. I think I'm leaning more towards the new head vs the old. Even though the old one looks more fierce, the pose looks a little too awkward imo (looks like...
  3. Updated and looking for more work!

    Updated and looking for more work!
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    Nice work! Here's a paint over: the lighting for...

    Nice work! Here's a paint over: the lighting for the head/eye stood out to me. Also, not sure how the lizard is situated in the space since it feels pretty 'flat', especially in the torso area.
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  5. Updated with new work, looking for more :)

    Updated with new work, looking for more :)
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    SketchBook: Nice colors on your update! A few things I can...

    Nice colors on your update! A few things I can see is that the subsurface scattering in the ears is too intense, seeing that your key light is in front of your figure, not behind. Also, the figure...
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    SketchBook: Lots of improvement in your sketchbook, really...

    Lots of improvement in your sketchbook, really enjoying your movie screenshot studies!

    I definitely agree with what Agerkvist said about studies. To be more specific, you should probably ask...
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    SketchBook: Nice update, the texture work in your traditional...

    Nice update, the texture work in your traditional sketches is great :)!
  9. Thread: Mad Maxine

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    The biggest problem I see is inconsistent...

    The biggest problem I see is inconsistent lighting. Right now, the shadows and lighting on the figure conflict with those on the machinery behind her.

    I've watched some of Kuciara's tutorials and...
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    SketchBook: Cool, thanks! Keep up the nice studies!

    Cool, thanks!

    Keep up the nice studies!
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    SketchBook: Great work on the new piece in #536! It looks...

    Great work on the new piece in #536! It looks really dynamic, and the anatomy + perspective look really believable. One thing that stands out to me though is the head/neck is too big/long, or the...
  12. Thread: Fun times

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    My biggest critique, other than seriously...

    My biggest critique, other than seriously spending more time to learn fundamentals, is lighting and rendering form. The lighting on the mask doesn't really make sense, not really sure where it's...
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    What Justa and darnis said about using reference...

    What Justa and darnis said about using reference is good and all.. but that's still not addressing the bigger questions/problems here: understanding anatomy and rendering form. Take some time to read...
  14. looking for more work !

    looking for more work !
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    The problems with the lower body is mainly the...

    The problems with the lower body is mainly the perspective/foreshortening conflicting with the background and other figures, nothing else seems to be as heavily foreshortened as her legs.

    Contrast...
  16. Thread: Weapon design

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    Art: Personally, I'd go with 1 and 2, since I like...

    Personally, I'd go with 1 and 2, since I like their silhouettes more. 1 looks slightly more unique compared to other gun designs floating around, while the rest look more generic.
  17. Thread: Kitty Critique

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    Wow, those new heads have way more character than...

    Wow, those new heads have way more character than the previous ones! The curls on the fur and eye browns gives him a different personality (more regal).
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    SketchBook: Nice Sb, really like how much traditional stuff...

    Nice Sb, really like how much traditional stuff you do! Anatomy's really coming along :)
  19. Looking pretty good so far. To answer your...

    Looking pretty good so far. To answer your questions:

    1. Creating backgrounds is pretty different from characters. You're going to have to spend some time learning how to create convincing...
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    SketchBook: double post oops.

    double post oops.
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    SketchBook: Really cool work, it definitely feels like the...

    Really cool work, it definitely feels like the viewer's someone in the crowd, and the atmosphere/lighting helps with that! One thing though, the scaling of the pullers seem a little off. The the guys...
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    Nice sb prophecies, the lotr painting looks...

    Nice sb prophecies, the lotr painting looks great. I think you should do some more studies on how to render basic forms and breaking down the more complex ones before you begin rendering. In your...
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    Looking good so far with the atmospheric...

    Looking good so far with the atmospheric perspective.

    I think you can make it better by taking some time and doing some (more) studies of rocks and cliff faces. The lighting doesn't work on the...
  24. Thread: Kitty Critique

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    What Naidy has said is pretty spot on in regards...

    What Naidy has said is pretty spot on in regards to the design aspects.

    From the looks of it, you need to hone your fundamentals before focusing on the design. Since you mentioned volume,...
  25. For changing the lighting, I think you can just...

    For changing the lighting, I think you can just darken the rocks with some bounce light from beneath, since the light source is coming from directly above on the figure. Right now, the light looks...
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