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    SketchBook: Your drawing is really fantastic, gesture, study...

    Your drawing is really fantastic, gesture, study bridgman, loomis and design. keep it up !!
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    I would tighten up the entire figure - especially...

    I would tighten up the entire figure - especially the hair which its looking patchy.
    Plus, it might be good to decide on a style and stick with it. Right now, the background, the hair and the face...
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    Pay more attention to the eyesocket structure....

    Pay more attention to the eyesocket structure. The way you interpreted it is likely to cause problems with painting later, because you haven't really defined the bones, planes or folds.

    Don't...
  4. Thread: Trapped

    by Father Tiny
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    Now this is more of a personal opinion, but you...

    Now this is more of a personal opinion, but you changed the critter to a lowbie level 2 alien :( I liked your other critter, and would have made it even a bit bigger to show this gladiator dude can...
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    So your first post says you want critique because...

    So your first post says you want critique because everyone else just tells they love your art, now that you have gotten lots of advice and recommendations to books that'll give even more help on your...
  6. Thread: Clint Eastwood

    by xNatje
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    Art: I really like the expression and the light of the...

    I really like the expression and the light of the portrait, but I don't like the splatters around the face. they disturb the image.
  7. Thread: Trapped

    by Kyllorac
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    Adding onto what JackGriffin said, the viewing...

    Adding onto what JackGriffin said, the viewing platform could be inset into the wall with a transparent material separating the audience from the action. Also, a landscape orientation would probably...
  8. Thread: Trapped

    by JackGriffin
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    Like others have said before me, the perspective...

    Like others have said before me, the perspective is off and it would look far better with a low angle shot making the hero ( if he is the hero) much more daunting/ powerful as hes in the foreground....
  9. Thread: Trapped

    by self-epidemic
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    If I were going to do this piece, I would have...

    If I were going to do this piece, I would have him looming over the beast, maybe even just showing a part of him and his shadow, the creature is big, too. So I think you'll have to think about whats...
  10. Thread: Trapped

    by michaelharris
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    You don't have a strong enough grasp on...

    You don't have a strong enough grasp on perspective to completely fake it. If you are going to put in buildings in the background, you need to go ahead and put down a horizon line and find your...
  11. Thread: Trapped

    by Kyllorac
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    The canvas feels too tall, and so everything...

    The canvas feels too tall, and so everything feels a bit cramped. I think if you were to widen the canvas and crop off maybe 1/8th from the top, it would have more of a dramatic feel. Right now, the...
  12. Thread: Trapped

    by Artimatum
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    What references are you using for the guy and...

    What references are you using for the guy and creature?Right now here is my problem with the pose,it needs more action from the beast,I'd turn the beast so that its facing him more,also having his...
  13. Thread: Trapped

    by DAMJAN
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    Ok, well you need to make this a larger place,...

    Ok, well you need to make this a larger place, right now it doesn't have that feel of an arena but some corner alley. I would make them smaller and I would change the angle so it's like we are...
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    schlock means gore or nudity or violence thats...

    schlock means gore or nudity or violence thats not really story driven, and so kind of stripped of meaning. it can be fun, but its ultimately hollow.

    im not saying portraying naked chracters is in...
  15. Thread: Clown

    by Swamp Thing
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    1. Use reference and/or built up everything in...

    1. Use reference and/or built up everything in geometrical forms. Right now your rendering looks odd, the light source doesn't work because forms are shaped wrong. Also, where is the balloon in...
  16. Thread: Clown

    by jhonshadow
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    @dog-faced: I know it doesn't help, but I'm not...

    @dog-faced: I know it doesn't help, but I'm not good enough to see mistakes in this one... the only thing I might be able to say is try to get a front, center and background in it, that's about it :s
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    by Chris Sanders
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    @jhonshadow - thats not helpful. First of all...

    @jhonshadow - thats not helpful.

    First of all i would say that the composition doesn't do a lot for me. this gets said on this forum too much... but that because no one ever does it; thumbnail...
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    Hi matey I like this a lot, its simple and...

    Hi matey

    I like this a lot, its simple and yet rather effective, good one mate.

    all the best
  19. Thread: Gravedancer

    by Barefoot
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    hands and feet are a little too small and HER...

    hands and feet are a little too small and HER left lower leg is a little too short in comparison to the upper leg.
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    by EvilBunny
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    Vineris is right, the planes are wrong. She...

    Vineris is right, the planes are wrong. She matches with the sea and mountain, but the sand or ground she's standing on is off. She might also be at a tangent with her elbow and the back pole. Her...
  21. Thread: Gravedancer

    by vineris
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    Nail down how she's interfacing with the ground. ...

    Nail down how she's interfacing with the ground. Right now it's not believable because we're looking slightly down on her from about the level of her face while the ground dips towards us at some...
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    by Hai
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    Don't worry about it, you're still early in the...

    Don't worry about it, you're still early in the process and have got the basic idea down.

    I really like the idea and atmosphere of this piece. I think you have a pretty good composition going --...
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    HI there sorry mate I didnt know it was...

    HI there


    sorry mate I didnt know it was part of a story, stick the relevant part up and I will turn my weird brain loose upon it and see what falls out!!

    If we have to work with that...
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    Is there any reason for the horizon line to be so...

    Is there any reason for the horizon line to be so high? I think the reason she looks pasted in is because her perspective doesn't match that of the environment.
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    Hi matey I just had a thought for you whilst...

    Hi matey

    I just had a thought for you whilst looking at this, do one of those rectangular riased grave, tomb things, make her a ghostly shape and go single source lighting from the moon. go for...
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