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    It looks really nice :) My main problem (apart...

    It looks really nice :) My main problem (apart from the already mentioned penguin flow) is reading that the closet is actually a closet, it looks more like a house door. Maybe it would benefit from a...
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    face palm, its probably a space for the text isnt...

    face palm, its probably a space for the text isnt it. Sorry Maggie!
    your art style is absolutely lovely, i think if you thumbnailed more carefully your work would be fantastic.


    "I just wrote a...
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    I was going to ask 'Why it was so wide?'. If it's...

    I was going to ask 'Why it was so wide?'. If it's for print, is this a 2 page spread with text across it?
    If not then I'd reposition a few things as you're cramping everything into really small...
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    Hmmm I have no clue about the ultimate good...

    Hmmm I have no clue about the ultimate good solution but here are some ideas, hope it can help you :) :

    If you want to let it be a "surprise" but show there is actually "something" mysterious,...
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    It's charming. And I agree; there's just...

    It's charming.

    And I agree; there's just something about the penguin's position that doesn't work. I dropped it into Photoshop and tried moving him around, but was never quite happy with it. It's...
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    That's a very very nice illustration, I like the...

    That's a very very nice illustration, I like the mood and color, it's great !

    I agree, the little guy body don't follow the movement of the lamp. You can give the lamp a more vertical angle too to...
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    It seems the penguin is not flowing the same...

    It seems the penguin is not flowing the same direction that the light is going in, and seems to work against the flow of the image, I did a VERY quick paintover, to show you what i mean. Other wise...
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    Artfix beat me too it. (using birds or some other...

    Artfix beat me too it. (using birds or some other animal to help indicate scale.)

    Lowering your horizon line might also help. I uploaded an example. (Just...cut each layer and moved them up....
  9. Thread: Swamp Thing

    by Artfix
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    I think it looks pretty good now. But now that...

    I think it looks pretty good now. But now that you have used the blending modes, you need to iron out the errors those cause like those banding rainbow colors. Go over it now and paint it manually. ...
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    looking good! i totally agree with what keith...

    looking good! i totally agree with what keith said and did.
    also maybe try to make sure your image has a foreground, middleground and background. that draws you in.
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    by keith_v
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    I think you have a really nice piece here. The...

    I think you have a really nice piece here. The biggest issues seem to be in the flatness and lack of light. I did a paint-over so you can see some of the areas where light can help create more depth...
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    ha youre really welcome! the pyramids are all...

    ha youre really welcome!
    the pyramids are all you, i just stretched them a bit and burnt off the foreground some.
    good luck!
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    maybe try messing with the crop, aspect ration...

    maybe try messing with the crop, aspect ration and things like that, nows the time to chop stuff around and see what works, before you get too commited to the image as is..
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    by Capt Surge
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    I hope this makes it a bit more clear where some...

    I hope this makes it a bit more clear where some more of the mistakes lie
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    by Spikings
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    The first thing that I see when I see this...

    The first thing that I see when I see this picture is that the alien looks crosseyed. The small black dots remind me of pupils that a human would have, even if they are not meant to be as such in the...
  16. Thread: Alien

    by Quigleyer
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    Maggie, The problem I'm having with your...

    Maggie,

    The problem I'm having with your rendering right now is how evenly diffused all of the light is all over his head. Where light hits (and therefore reflects) more try to make those marks...
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    by Krappt
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    good character

    good character
  18. Thread: Alien

    by Quint_
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    The image being too flat is the major drawback...

    The image being too flat is the major drawback for me and was nicely highlighted by Quigleyer and his/her paintover. It is most notable on the dome of its forehead and with a little more attention to...
  19. Thread: Alien

    by Quigleyer
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    I think it's a little flat. I tried my hand at a...

    I think it's a little flat. I tried my hand at a paintover to show you some bigger shapes I think define this things head, or to give you an idea of what I mean. I think there's also some skewing...
  20. Thread: Alien

    by justa
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    For what it's worth, my big issue is that it is...

    For what it's worth, my big issue is that it is blurry. Rather like those old 60's blur lenses they put on actresses' close-ups to hide the wrinkles. Did you run some kind of filter over it? I...
  21. Thread: Alien

    by Mark Brooks
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    I like it the way it but but can see a slight...

    I like it the way it but but can see a slight issue where the top of the head meets the background. I think the brownish line around that area is taking away from the realism of the piece.
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    by abone114
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    Pretty cool so far, I think if the lighting is...

    Pretty cool so far, I think if the lighting is that contrasting then there would be some stronger edged shadows. Right now the transition is very soft. Determine the light source/direction and base...
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    by DAMJAN
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    Yes it does but if you love that type of a vibe,...

    Yes it does but if you love that type of a vibe, it's not really hurting in my opinion. This looks more of a bat humanoid than alien though.
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