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    I'm liking the new character, especially the...

    I'm liking the new character, especially the pose. I'd have to agree with Lhune's point about simplicity, and though you've improved I still find the forearm area a little confusing to look at. Maybe...
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    Skin as a lot of subtle variations in its tone;...

    Skin as a lot of subtle variations in its tone; you're kind of jumping between wildly saturated hues, like on the sternocleidomastoid, and completely flat tan. The color will also be largely affected...
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    Cool idea, but as Quigleyer said, I'm having a...

    Cool idea, but as Quigleyer said, I'm having a bit of trouble picturing the movement. Her lower body seems to be pushing her to the side, but her upper body is straight up and down. Her left arm...
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    I'm getting a YEAH BEST BUDS feel from the latest...

    I'm getting a YEAH BEST BUDS feel from the latest update, which is totally rad cool bro but I think a more controlling or ambiguous look would be nice. You say you wanted them merged at the arm;...
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    Interesting. That left ankle of hers looks like...

    Interesting. That left ankle of hers looks like it's in a really uncomfortable position, though, and her right hand looks to be somewhat too large. I'll wait until I see the actual render, but at the...
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    The mask fits in more when in color. Still, would...

    The mask fits in more when in color. Still, would be uncomfortable to wear stone on one's head, I'd imagine. Especially since it'd be pressing up against his two sets of hidden eyes. How's it...
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    The demon's mask looks like it's of a different...

    The demon's mask looks like it's of a different style or construction than the rest of him, almost looking fabricated or machined out of metal. This might change with the colors put in, but at the...
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    Though it might have been deliberate, I found...

    Though it might have been deliberate, I found this to be a large departure from the style you've established for the world. Interesting given the backstory, but things like the midriff-baring top and...
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    Very nice! The head design makes me think of a...

    Very nice! The head design makes me think of a grasshopper, almost. The way the head looks like it's been ripped straight from the body and planted onto a robotic body is really morbid and perfect...
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    That's a cool story indeed. The mayor's...

    That's a cool story indeed.
    The mayor's out-of-mask design is nice, but I wouldn't have known it's connected to the lab form if you didn't tell me...they look like two completely different...
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    I agree with the gun. It was hard to figure out...

    I agree with the gun. It was hard to figure out the scale of it by the picture, since there's apparently a discrepancy between the handle size and the trigger size, and the handguard on it suggested...
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    That doesn't look too bad, actually. It's an...

    That doesn't look too bad, actually. It's an appropriate, almost sandblasted, metal look and it comes off as quite well-made -- especially in the chest and shoulder.
    The thigh guard, though, does...
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    Interesting. To complete the story, I think it'd...

    Interesting.
    To complete the story, I think it'd be better if the Queen's face was less obscured. That way she'd display a full-on look of contempt that in my opinion would contrast nicely with Snow...
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    I think it looks a bit monotone simply because,...

    I think it looks a bit monotone simply because, right now, it sort of is. The background is really intense and a much wider span of values compared to the character himself.
    The way the light is set...
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    The groin guard sticks out a bit, both literally...

    The groin guard sticks out a bit, both literally and figuratively. Having it lay flush with (Possibly thicker) torso armor would correct that right away.

    Falchion is right, too, in that the suit...
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    I don't find that the contrast is the problem,...

    I don't find that the contrast is the problem, though as Jeff points out there are some other things that seem to be shaking up the composition.

    Throughout the whole picture, though, you seem to...
  17. The root of the nose is where the top of the nose...

    The root of the nose is where the top of the nose connects to the brow ridge. The form looks a bit odd, or flattened by the strokes there. Though, now that I stare at it, the other end of the nose is...
  18. This isn't bad at all. The nose seems a bit odd...

    This isn't bad at all. The nose seems a bit odd (The visible wing should go a bit further back, and the root is a bit ambiguous) and the ear seems to be set a bit high, but other than that there are...
  19. If you're going for realism -- and you're doing a...

    If you're going for realism -- and you're doing a pretty good job at it so far -- I you should change the shape of the chest guard. Breast-shaped breastplates are really unnecessary and may even...
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    Not a bad job, though some of the proportions are...

    Not a bad job, though some of the proportions are off. I can't point them all out at once, but some examples include Kagen's short arms, Relm's overall shortness (There's something about her that...
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    Also, because I sort of fumbled with words the...

    Also, because I sort of fumbled with words the first time: What I meant by the sternocleidomastoids was that, while they converge pretty closely, they don't touch; on this pic, they're fusing...
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    In addition to the (very good) points above, it...

    In addition to the (very good) points above, it appears that the neck's just not pivoting the right way. Her entire head is moved back as a result. Keep in mind where the neck connects to the skull...
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    How much speed do you want? Right now, at the...

    How much speed do you want? Right now, at the most, she's slowly waving it in front of her in a sort of look-at-my-weapon way. If she were swinging it faster, her arm would be bent in a more actiony...
  24. These are pretty great! You render form well. ...

    These are pretty great! You render form well.

    Sometimes your light direction can get a bit iffy, though (like on the afro girl with the gun), and the orange backlight can look a bit isolated when...
  25. There is no mystical way to drop an "amateur"...

    There is no mystical way to drop an "amateur" look. What make a "non-amateur" work "non-amateur" is how each part of it is well-practiced and developed through hard work.

    One surefire step,...
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