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    Nice start on these. You are headed in the right...

    Nice start on these. You are headed in the right direction.

    When you get your shapes worked out well, pay very close attention to the values. You want to match the values you see as closely as...
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    these are really beautiful studies. My main...

    these are really beautiful studies. My main thought is that you are showing a consistent over strengthening of the values/levels. I would suggest going in and adjusting levels a little bit on each...
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    Your values on this most recent are close but...

    Your values on this most recent are close but must get closer. Notice the dark darks. Notice the differences in your big dark masses. Going in and adjusting your levels (or using the camera raw...
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    Your next goal should be putting down values at...

    Your next goal should be putting down values at 99 percent to 100 percent accuracy with each stroke. One issue you are having is you are putting down values before being 100 percent sure and then...
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    Nice work. You are on the right path for sure. ...

    Nice work. You are on the right path for sure. Your shapes and values are coming along well. Be sure that you are keeping a close eye on your edges. Note where the sharpest sharpest sharps and...
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    Very nice closure on this thread. Your levels...

    Very nice closure on this thread. Your levels are still a little varied. Notice the light lights especially. There are some differences there yet. However, the shapes, edges, and other values are...
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    Ok great to see where you are at. When you are...

    Ok great to see where you are at. When you are first getting started it is very important to really focus in on the mapping out of your shapes as accurately as you can possibly get them. If you put...
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    please reupload your image and be sure that the...

    please reupload your image and be sure that the thumbnail renders in the text reply box when you drag it into the reply box. If you push submit too early it can x out. Waiting two secs will have...
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    You are doing great...and challenging yourself. ...

    You are doing great...and challenging yourself. That's key to improving. I would love to see a little more analysis as you are pretty close with your method and ability to capture shape, value and...
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    Pushing a bit closer with the surface textures...

    Pushing a bit closer with the surface textures would take these to the next level for sure. Beautiful job. You can grab the brushes that kekai kotaki or jaime jones or daarken lim put out for free...
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    These are gorgeous marks...and you have a good...

    These are gorgeous marks...and you have a good process happening. The only real area you should tighten up on is the early drawing and shape mapping as you are rendering with shapes that are having...
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    These are great. who is the master illustrator...

    These are great. who is the master illustrator who did the space suit piece? Beautiful studies of both the latest. What types of compositional devices are you finding in these? What are you...
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    Nice work! I might suggest pushing the various...

    Nice work! I might suggest pushing the various specular maps in the piece so you are letting the texture artists know more about which areas are gloss or matte or more shiny or not. the pole is...
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    These are getting progressively better with each...

    These are getting progressively better with each one. I really like seeing that happen. good work.

    You are getting about 90 percent there with the three most important things...shapes, values and...
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    Having a hard time seeing your images. When you...

    Having a hard time seeing your images. When you make a post are you allowing the images to fully load and the small thumbnail to render prior to pushing submit? I will keep an eye on this thread. ...
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    These are a great start. You can select the...

    These are a great start. You can select the flesh on the portrait and paste it to a new layer and run a guassian blur on it and see a bit more softness in the transitions and gradients. then erase...
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    This is excellent. I think a little more clarity...

    This is excellent. I think a little more clarity in the brush marks in places (like the whites of the background) and it would require a double take to see the differences. You did an phenomenal...
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    You are doing great and making good progress so I...

    You are doing great and making good progress so I hope you will keep them rolling. Technique is strong and because of that I am most curious to hear what you are seeing when you look at the...
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    Nice start on these. You are headed in the right...

    Nice start on these. You are headed in the right direction. When you get your shapes worked out well, pay very close attention to the values. You want to match the values you see as closely as you...
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    A few comments...and nice work to get this...

    A few comments...and nice work to get this rolling too.

    The gerome portrait...watch the value transition between mass light and mass shadow on the head. You went a little harsh at that transition...
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    ok..these are improving and are looking great. ...

    ok..these are improving and are looking great. My only comment is to begin using more texture brushes so that you begin to capture that surface and those edges that the masters are getting. You are...
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    Your most recent is the most accurate so the...

    Your most recent is the most accurate so the feedback from the group is clearly being heard. Great job. The most recent is worth sharing so we will blast it out on our social media. Your analysis...
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    I am having a problem seeing your images. When...

    I am having a problem seeing your images. When you upload, please be sure that the images have all rendered as thumbnails before pushing submit. I will keep an eye open for this. The one that is...
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    These are great so far. Two small comments but...

    These are great so far. Two small comments but big concepts for you to think on and apply. 1. slowing down just a little bit early on to map out your shapes as accurately as possible will cause...
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    These are excellent and right at the level of...

    These are excellent and right at the level of finish that I like to see in the shorter studies. With that said, you are 95percent there or closer, which means you can still push for more accuracy...
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