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    SketchBook: Inspiration struck again and ended up looking...

    Inspiration struck again and ended up looking like this.

    EDIT: As before I used a reference for this.
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    While making the feet larger, have a go at...

    While making the feet larger, have a go at connecting the one on top to the ribcage and the shirt. As of now, it looks as if the foot isn't standing on the ribcage since there aren't any suggestive...
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    Lots of interesting details. But, for the poses:...

    Lots of interesting details. But, for the poses: rethink how their backs are looking.

    Yes, yes, they are facing forward, but the curvature of their backs shape their torsos too. These people are...
  4. Thread: Oni Ownage

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    To me, the samurai has a wrist, an elbow and an...

    To me, the samurai has a wrist, an elbow and an upperarmbow. Have a look in a mirror or find a reference for how the arm behaves with its muscles when stretched straight.

    I have no idea about what...
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    By "Fae" I meant "from the land of the Fae", or...

    By "Fae" I meant "from the land of the Fae", or "fairies". It has the slenderness and thin frame of a typical pixie and not a human female.

    In my (very quick) paint over, I've marked the...
  6. Thread: New here.

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    I read the white circular shape in upper right...

    I read the white circular shape in upper right and black shape in lower right as a rounded edge and something dark to suggest the person wielding the weapon. If that's not what you're going for,...
  7. Thread: "Longneck" WIP

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    Is she running? I'm looking for the "Why?" since...

    Is she running? I'm looking for the "Why?" since her robe is flowing a bit behind her but her arms suggest something completely different.

    I really like how you've shaped her right hand. The...
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    You've picked very nice colours and her eyes...

    You've picked very nice colours and her eyes stand out with nice rendering. You've also made a pretty good job with the two light sources but while sharpening her left ear it looks as if you also...
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    Both the old and new Dorothy seem to lack a...

    Both the old and new Dorothy seem to lack a proper pelvis. I can see it as part of a style but it looks a bit weird when her head is almost as wide as her hips.

    As concepts, I like the rendition...
  10. Thread: NSFW - Cowgirl

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    She has a very thin frame and huge breasts. Sure,...

    She has a very thin frame and huge breasts. Sure, there are women looking like that but in this case it gets a bit weird. If you're aiming for a boob-shot, you got it.

    And, talking about her...
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    To me, the shading suggests a knee that's very...

    To me, the shading suggests a knee that's very much turned inwards. The knee cap, when standing, is more of an oblong bump than in your image.

    As far as I know, the proportions of the arms are...
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    Tilting your camera won't make a stroll to the...

    Tilting your camera won't make a stroll to the mall adventurous or dangerous unless the ground is laden with razor blades. And that's kind of how I view this piece.

    I can see the danger, over...
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    The face is in some kind of weird state. Either...

    The face is in some kind of weird state. Either you can see her right eye socket or not but when you make up your mind about that, change the rest too. Her lips aren't suggesting a profile picture...
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    The extremely dark shadow hiding the right eye...

    The extremely dark shadow hiding the right eye socket doesn't rhyme well with the rest. There are pretty strong highlights on the right arm.

    The shadows under the body aren't connecting it to the...
  15. Thread: Plain Girl

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    Try to imagine the center line in her face....

    Try to imagine the center line in her face. Imagine it passing her nose and ending up at her upper lip. To me, it looks as if her nose points one way and her mouth another. It's not a big difference...
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    You have a strong light source in the lower left corner, a protruding nose and no shadow.

    Apart from that it's a nice piece with lots of things to explore.
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    I still get the feeling that her arms are too...

    I still get the feeling that her arms are too short. If i try to fold my left arm the same way I get the feeling that my elbow is further down, suggesting a longer upper arm. But when I measure a...
  18. Thread: Janos

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    SketchBook: I should have gone to sleep almost an hour ago...

    I should have gone to sleep almost an hour ago but I kept finding such interesting things in here that it feels worth it to be a little tired tomorrow.

    One thing that has haunted me from page one...
  19. SketchBook: The helmet in the last concept looks too small,...

    The helmet in the last concept looks too small, making it look as if the forehead has been compacted together with the rest of the cranium. Apart from that it works very well.

    If I'm taking...
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    SketchBook: Your sketches look great but when you apply that...

    Your sketches look great but when you apply that knowledge you often end up with shallow heads. Keep that head-box in your mind at all times trying not to deprive your subjects of a quarter of their...
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    Monsters in the water sneaking a peek under her dress. The ceiling cat sees you.

    Unless she's a statue, I'd suggest some small movement on the surface. If she's breathing, she's moving, if ever so...
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    SketchBook: Lots of interesting shapes and ideas that stand...

    Lots of interesting shapes and ideas that stand out a bit. You do nice things with the colours you use but I think you'd be able to do even more if you varied your line width even more.

    Wormhead...
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    SketchBook: Spend some time on where your light sources are...

    Spend some time on where your light sources are and try to be consistent while shading. Start out easy with one direct light source and perhaps some diffuse indirect light to add some environmental...
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    SketchBook: You're making progress, no doubt about it. And...

    You're making progress, no doubt about it. And you're approaching painting in a very ... mathematical way breaking down the components into measurable parts. I can in some ways relate to that and it...
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    SketchBook: Learning (with some nudity along the way)

    I got my Wacom tablet in December 2008 and I merrily use GIMP to try to learn something about drawing and at the same time have as much fun as possible. I don't think I have a future as an...
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