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    1) There is a huge tangent with her green sash...

    1) There is a huge tangent with her green sash and the green branch behind her. They blend into each other too much.

    2) Is she supposed to have a harelip? If her face is supposed to have some...
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    I feel that the far balloon is awkwardly close to...

    I feel that the far balloon is awkwardly close to his face. If it were moved more down and to the right, the composition would have a more pleasing flow. That same balloon could also use a bit less...
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    Unfortunately, my first thought was, "she has a...

    Unfortunately, my first thought was, "she has a giant gaping hole in her side? And she's reaching into it? And fire's coming out??" It really took me awhile to realize that gaping hole is actually a...
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    Sticky: Here's a few of mine I had saved, I hope they can...

    Here's a few of mine I had saved, I hope they can continue to be useful to someone!

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  5. Thread: Skog Troll

    by Pixelestial
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    Oh, shouldn't the troll's arm be visible behind...

    Oh, shouldn't the troll's arm be visible behind the trees under the archer's armpit?
  6. Thank you SO much, that really gave me something...

    Thank you SO much, that really gave me something to work with. I sent a few test covers to the client with your advice in mind, and we found something he likes. Still needs some minor tweaks, but I'm...
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    CD covers don't use a rectangular format like...

    CD covers don't use a rectangular format like this that I'm aware of.

    Maybe the "suciede" is intentionally misspelled, maybe not. If it is, there should probably be other things misspelled too to...
  8. Pen & Paper Ruleset E-book Cover - Background Help?

    I'm a bit at a loss for where to go with this e-book cover -- specifically the background texture. I showed the dark blue version to the client first, and was told it was too dark and that he didn't...
  9. Thread: beast

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    Drawing the beast from a worm's eye view instead...

    Drawing the beast from a worm's eye view instead of a straight-on profile would also help give it a sense of scale.
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    The wolf's anatomy (especially of the face and...

    The wolf's anatomy (especially of the face and paws) is really really detracting from everything else. I don't suppose it can be redone at this point?
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    It's tough to say where you went wrong without...

    It's tough to say where you went wrong without seeing your reference, but at a glance there's not enough of a likeness. The facial anatomy in general looks like it needs work. Maybe we could give...
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    The scythe is disappearing into his leg armor. ...

    The scythe is disappearing into his leg armor. The values are too similar, do something to separate them.

    The rock he's sitting on is pretty tough to notice, so it looks like he's squatting...
  13. The feet echo each others' movements and overlap...

    The feet echo each others' movements and overlap too closely, so there's some visual confusion there. Vary them up a bit.
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    The human is the weak point of this picture. ...

    The human is the weak point of this picture. First, his pose. If he's trying to get a shot at the creature, why is his body facing the camera instead of the monster? Get a reference, I want to see...
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    Her head looks too large and her forearms too...

    Her head looks too large and her forearms too long in comparison to her upper arms. Maybe it would help if you posted your original blueline.
  16. Thread: elfe noir

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    The arm closest to us is looking nice with its...

    The arm closest to us is looking nice with its secondary bluish light, but that blue light is nowhere else to be seen. Try spreading it sparingly on his clothes and hair to bring it all together.
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    Thanks, Giacomo. I was afraid of putting too...

    Thanks, Giacomo. I was afraid of putting too much detail and contrast on the large structure for fear that it would start to creep into the foreground too much. Is this too much?
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    A Biotech Landscape

    This is about how far I usually get with my paintings, and then I get stuck. I never know what to do next to finish the image. I appreciate all feedback and advice!
  19. The rear horseman is just a wee bit too faded out...

    The rear horseman is just a wee bit too faded out to my eyes. Make his darks darker and you'll be good to go.
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    You're not yet seeing how things relate to one...

    You're not yet seeing how things relate to one another, so the elegant gesture of the reference is lost. For example, notice how the bottom of the ribcage juts out further than the breasts in your...
  21. My first thought was "murderous scarecrow". To...

    My first thought was "murderous scarecrow". To me, an unkempt beard is an important part of achieving a hobo look, so without one, my mind instantly goes elsewhere.

    Design-wise, the two sacks in...
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    It looks a little flat because there are no...

    It looks a little flat because there are no shadows to define the forms. Do you have a reference we can see?

    Also, the background is overpowering at the moment. Is it possible to desaturate it...
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    Yeah, he's really front-heavy right now. His...

    Yeah, he's really front-heavy right now. His legs need to be repositioned to counterbalance that big belly.
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    I like the idea of the spear flying across the...

    I like the idea of the spear flying across the page, but right now it is bisecting the composition, drawing way too much attention to itself. I suggest making it much shorter, so it works with...
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    First thought: "What is that orange thing?" ...

    First thought: "What is that orange thing?"

    Meaning, Ganondorf's face is blending too much into the background and doesn't match the lighting on his hair. Use values and lighting to separate the...
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