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  1. Thread: Kiss Kiss

    by stephou
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    Yes, you can't spend forever working on values....

    Yes, you can't spend forever working on values. But even on the sketch stage you should be getting something a bit more coherent. Simplify the problems in terms of large surfaces. For example, quite...
  2. Thread: Kiss Kiss

    by stephou
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    There's definitely a recurrent value problem in...

    There's definitely a recurrent value problem in your work. Spend some more time thinking where light will go from each light source independantly, and really pay attention to the distance to the...
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    Actually quite a good idea. I was using...

    Actually quite a good idea. I was using ctrl+scroll...
    Dylf : I'd recommend posting something that can be viewed completely on a modest screen. Usually it's mostly part of presentation and I get the...
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    Post a smaller picture please.

    Post a smaller picture please.
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    Don't be shy with the reflections. Also, if you...

    Don't be shy with the reflections. Also, if you have the castle reflected in the water, but not at full opacity, what you will see is what is underneath the water, not sky colour. But if you haven't...
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    You will definitely have to practice your values...

    You will definitely have to practice your values and volumes. Also, the water needs to reflect what's behind it and the sky, it shouldn't have some colour to it other than that.
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    I think this does require more thumbnailing (yeah...

    I think this does require more thumbnailing (yeah I probably just invented a word). The title doesn't seem to fit the painting other than there being children running around. Maybe you could add more...
  8. Thread: The hunt

    by stephou
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    You might not like this but how about starting...

    You might not like this but how about starting over with a new composition ?
    I mean, we can spend ages trying to fix and fiddle with the composition, but if it wasn't good from the start, why not...
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    Since I've been working on armour these last...

    Since I've been working on armour these last days, here's the process you should follow.
    Build a 3d character without armour. Use reference if needed, build the complete body (except for details...
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    Art: The anatomy is very weird, I'd recommend using...

    The anatomy is very weird, I'd recommend using reference and paying alot of attention to proportions. Her chest is tiny compared to her hips. It may be some fantasy thing, but there are some...
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    Build the squeletton with red lines on another...

    Build the squeletton with red lines on another layer. I'd move the character up a bit to make some space for his arm.
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    Well you're not getting the method of planning...

    Well you're not getting the method of planning right. You need to work on everything together, not work on separate things. For example, you should build a rough shape of everything, rough shading,...
  13. You definitely need to do a few complete works...

    You definitely need to do a few complete works once in a while. Pulling everything together requires a whole new set of skills and there are many weaknesses of yours you might be missing. Coherent...
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    Well obviously your aim won't be realistic, so...

    Well obviously your aim won't be realistic, so it's hard to know what you really want to change or not. But I do get the feeling it's very flat and 2d, except for the 2 riders. Also it lacks focal...
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    There is still too much black. Basically light...

    There is still too much black. Basically light will reflect alot on the snow, so you would get some bounce light everywhere. The areas that get the most light are usually those that 'stick out',...
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    Well this might not be exactly what you're...

    Well this might not be exactly what you're expecting but stop working as much on details and rendering for now, but work on values, both overall and of objects.
    If you make the moon brighter, you...
  17. Thread: 1st post

    by stephou
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    Post a much smaller picture please. It's hard to...

    Post a much smaller picture please. It's hard to get a general view if you have to scroll forever.
    But it seems to me you've picked up loads of bad habits everywhere. Only use the round brush,...
  18. There are a few anatomy problems, like the...

    There are a few anatomy problems, like the forearm in the second piece. As for composition, it's hard to say without the values and everything else that goes with it. Maybe you can work on this a bit...
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    I think it may have to do with your description...

    I think it may have to do with your description too but don't worry about it.
    I'd say that like most people who draw in anime, you need to work on your fundamentals and get some solid paintings...
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    Your biggest problem is by far the composition. I...

    Your biggest problem is by far the composition. I tried to paintover to clear out the shapes and give more interest but there's an inherent problem with the shapes themselves.
    The chainsaw passes...
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    Did you decide where the moon is ? Also, shadows...

    Did you decide where the moon is ? Also, shadows should be slightly more bluish.
    But for example if you look at the girl, she doesn't have any shadow, highlighter areas or anything. She's just...
  22. I think you shouldn't be really listing...

    I think you shouldn't be really listing everything you know is wrong before fixing it. That being said, I suppose you want a sunset where the sun is on the right ? I'm having trouble finding the...
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    Yes, the spots in the clouds. I see what you...

    Yes, the spots in the clouds. I see what you wanted to do, especially with the mist (lets call it that, so it's not confused with clouds) making everything grey but you're hurting the composition....
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    I'm bothered by the wings mostly, they seem kind...

    I'm bothered by the wings mostly, they seem kind of bland and could use a bit more of a 'wing' look. I mean, they look too much like they're built of tubes. I hope you'll get what I mean. Also,...
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    It looks like you're using too small brushes but...

    It looks like you're using too small brushes but don't have much control over what you're doing. It seems to me like it's your bigger problem : the shadows and values are all blurred because you used...
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