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  1. Your rendering of the face and body are...

    Your rendering of the face and body are completely different, so yes I think parts of your drawing are based off photographs. And agreed with iambanana, you seem very unwilling to take critiques that...
  2. It looks like you took photographs of those...

    It looks like you took photographs of those people who model for Halloween costumes and painted on top of them. I'd pay a lot more attention to anatomy, posing, and structure. All three characters...
  3. Thread: Alien Dragon

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    Your anatomy looks extremely cartoony and...

    Your anatomy looks extremely cartoony and unbelievable. All I can say is use as much reference as you can and you need to add structure. At this point though it's a matter of you need to invest a...
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    You are picking terrible references for a...

    You are picking terrible references for a beginner. I'd start with some simple object studies or something with high contrast values.
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    This piece could benefit from going back to the...

    This piece could benefit from going back to the thumbnail stage, the composition right now is very static and awkward. The values are everywhere too, there is no depth.
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    SketchBook: No one is saying that you should completely give...

    No one is saying that you should completely give up on getting critiques, and if they do then they are wrong. But since I've watched this thread from the start, it's apparent that you are asking for...
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    Looking through your sketchbook I'd strongly...

    Looking through your sketchbook I'd strongly suggest sticking mainly with pencil and paper until you properly understand structure, form, proportion, and all that stuff. But keep doing simple studies...
  8. Thread: Mad Man Jack

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    Is this from reference? The left side of his face...

    Is this from reference? The left side of his face seems to extend farther out than the right side.
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    It could be different for Cal arts but they...

    It could be different for Cal arts but they generally don't want to see shading or tone in your portfolio, especially when its hiding all the flaws. There are way too many lines which indicate that...
  10. Right now I have no idea what is going on. The...

    Right now I have no idea what is going on. The shapes with the lights look like it is floating in the sky but the trees suggest we are looking at the ground? If you could explain the context and what...
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    You're getting the basic proportion and placement...

    You're getting the basic proportion and placement all wrong, as well as the general shape of the features. It looks like you are focusing on individual details rather than the face as a whole. It's a...
  12. Rendering aside, it doesn't look anything like a...

    Rendering aside, it doesn't look anything like a forge and I would have never guessed without the title. Next time do various thumbnails and explore different ways to portray what it is you are...
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    Negative space is a compositional issue so yes.

    Negative space is a compositional issue so yes.
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    The eye reads from left to right so place your...

    The eye reads from left to right so place your negative space on the right side instead of the left.
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    The composition would work better if you placed...

    The composition would work better if you placed the character on the left side of the image and vases on the right. Is the chair sitting on a mattress?
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    The colors were better in the first version. The...

    The colors were better in the first version. The main problem lies in that there is no believable light source and the edge work is making everything extremely flat to the point that the characters...
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    Try doing about 10-20 more thumbnails and...

    Try doing about 10-20 more thumbnails and experiment with composition. There are much more dynamic ways to depict this scene. Don't worry about color yet either it will just slow you down.
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    Worry less about shading and more about...

    Worry less about shading and more about perspective, it's all over the place especially with your cubes. Make sure to check your horizon line and vanishing points. As for shading...it looks weird...
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    Lightning doesn't work the way you've depicted...

    Lightning doesn't work the way you've depicted it, get some reference. And wouldn't it be easier for the gun to shoot lightning?
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    My advice is put the tablet away and start with...

    My advice is put the tablet away and start with the basic drawing fundamentals. Everything from your anatomy, perspective, color theory, composition etc... needs a lot of work. There are many...
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    It's the composition that isn't working, not your...

    It's the composition that isn't working, not your perspective. Half of the image is completely blank. As lightship suggested you are best off going back to doing thumbnails and coming up with...
  22. Your issues lie more in the fundamentals, relying...

    Your issues lie more in the fundamentals, relying on texture right now would act as a crutch. Using textures without proper knowledge will also make things look like a cheap photoshop filter.
  23. For the time being you would benefit a lot from...

    For the time being you would benefit a lot from doing some painting studies and learning how to render different materials. Pay close attention to your edges and brush strokes, they are very hazy and...
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    SketchBook: I would disagree and say it's lost, you can't...

    I would disagree and say it's lost, you can't rely on adding stuff to make it look good. You need a solid foundation or else no matter what you do the rest of the painting will look weak. The sooner...
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    SketchBook: A lot of people I talk to really struggle with...

    A lot of people I talk to really struggle with layouts and composition, it just takes practice! Thumbnails are awesome because they are really fast, small, and will save you loads of time later on....
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